This was a sweet story. I really enjoyed it!

Put More Mondler !

This is pretty good!

But... There are some things that could use a bit of work.

First off, the dialogue seems choppy. Try using Contractions more often.

And here, in the passage below, instead of doing this, you could break it up into two paragraphs. It's kind of REALLY annoying when an author doesn't properly break up dialogue. When another person speaks, said author should start a new paragraph.

"When we get home, I guess I will go see my lawyer." Ross said. "I am just going to see how it goes with Rachel . She is just too good of a thing to mess up again." As Ross went on and on about how he loved Rachel, Chandler had a deep far away look. He was feeling some of those same feelings himself. Every one of his thoughts these days seemed to be Monica. It almost killed him to see his best friend openly show his affection.

And in these two paragraphs,, you can use the horizontal line tool to create a break, so we can see when it switches to another scene. Without it, there may be unnecessary confusion.

"I hate this . God only knows how long we are going to be here. I want to be able to publicly acknowledge you as my boyfriend. " Monica moaned. "Give it time, we will." Chandler assured her. Knowing that their friends were away, the two of them embraced and then began to kiss.

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Emily Waltham –Geller sat up in her bed at her parents. She didn't want to be alone right now. She felt safe in the bed that she grew up in. Her late mother would come in and tuck her in at night when she was a little girl. As a teenager, her father would tell her that everything would be alright. She needed that right now.

Other than the things that I mentioned, and few minor grammaical errors, it seems like a great story. I'm off to the next chapter!

this was a great story. loved it

great story so far.

Well, you made it to 200 - which shows what romantic souls most of the Friends fanfiction fans are :). Pity we didn't see reactions from the Green or Geller parents, or for that matter from Green sisters and Geller relatives (e.g. Cousin Cassie!). But okay, it might have spoiled the mood.

Aww..I love it, it's so perfect! The wedding was beautiful and the scene in the cruise was so cute! D

A great story that we have enjoyed for over two months. Almost as good as "The One He Hurt".

Please consider revisiting some of your unfinished stories before starting another. I have read some of your previous work and think they are great. I am really intrigued by "Full Circle" where Susan leaves Carol. Carol then tries to get back with Ross who is engaged to Rachel. This fascinates me. Please consider ...

Aww yay everyone is happy! Lobsters are married and Mondler's engaged! loved it sis

This was a great story...it was very well written. Its one of the best I've read on this site! Good work!

yay! their together 4ever at last. I'll miss your lovely story. bye bye

so good! great fanfic one of te best in a while

This was a great story with a great ending. Ross and Rachel married and Chandler and Monica engaged. I liked the part whee Pheobe met Mike. I thought that was really well-written. You're a good writer and I'll look for more stories from you.

Good chapter. I really liked the end scene.

I loved your version of mondler in Vegas. Great job, as always.