Reviews for Their Happily Ever After
James Birdsong chapter 3 . 11/6/2015
Great three chapters
GreenTea4062 chapter 3 . 7/4/2015
This is a great piece of art...but I don't think Conan would be that...introvert. He always a cautious person since he encountered the black organization...but...

Ahh, I don't know!

By the way, good job!
A Midsummer chapter 3 . 4/19/2014
I admit, I took this better than the OVA-that-shall-not-be-mentioned-or-referenced-again. Maybe because the shock had long died down and so is the denial but honestly, I'm glad the possibility was addressed. Because Gosho can do it and rip whatever hope I had for Shinichi coming back. I'm still bitter about it though.

I'm glad, at least there parts that made it lighthearted. Especially the obvious reference to KID and the cameo of Kaito. His relationship with Aoko had been the most worrying in the MK fandom.
damncritic chapter 3 . 3/11/2014
Very very nice. A realistic view of what an ending without the medicine would be like. Especially liked the twist with kuroba.
ichiruzuka chapter 3 . 1/1/2013
This is difficult. I have to admit that I thinks of this as possible scenario, but I never thought Ran will marry Conan. I always thinks that Conan would end up marrying Ai if he can't go back being Shinichi.

But nonetheless you did excellent job, while I do caught some strange point in the story.

Age of legal marriage in Japan is 18 for males, while 16 is for females. So, Conan marry Ran too fast. And for added trivia, people considered adult at age 20. Do you know about this?

Why could Ai being accepted marrying a man thrice her age? Of course, being younger woman has its merits, but how about pairing her with someone younger? Like, for example, Saguru Hakuba?

Thank you for reading my rants. Hug for you if I got response.
SarahLikesCookies chapter 3 . 12/29/2010
.AMAZING!

i dont know what more to say! No word could describe how incredible this little story was!

~pickelD
xSakuraBlossom chapter 3 . 8/24/2010
Oh, that's so sad! I haven't finished the series yet, does Conan really never return to how he used to be? Aww...

This was extremely well written, and so realistic, I loved it. Great job, keep writing~
arsg66 chapter 3 . 5/27/2008
I haven't made a habit of reading DC fics, but this one is absolutely stunning. You've hit the right mark for me with how the future in their universe turns out. I always think about the difference between Shinichi and Conan, and you did a great job describing it.
Titou Douh chapter 3 . 3/25/2008
Wow...

First time that I read a fanfiction in English, it's a little bit... Difficult to understand all the words xD Well, my dictionnary is my best friend in cases like this...

Oh, and forgive me for my possible mistakes, I'm French and even I can speak a good English at school, it isn't the same thing on the web x)

So... I really liked this story ! Because it was different than stories we can find in the French part of the site.

From the first time, I appreciated the fact of discovering a new side of Ran et Shinichi's relationship, beacause it wasn't "like the others"

It was a really good story, and I add it on my favorite stories list !

Thank you for it and good continuation ! D
anaime7 chapter 3 . 3/11/2008
k.a.w.a.i.i.! Going on my fave list, I'm telling you! IT's SO good!
arashic chapter 3 . 2/6/2008
i absolutely CANNOT believe that i have never written a review for this story. oh my god.

this story is just... absolutely phenomenal. even though 'detective conan' is merely an anime show/comic series, you were able to analyze the characters' situations and delve much further to create this realistic, heartbreaking, emotional piece of writing. i enjoyed reading it very much. your grammar and descriptions are superb, and i was in awe at how powerful this story was.

thank you for this great story. i hope you write more like these.
The Violent Tomboy chapter 3 . 8/26/2007
Oh wow...this is beautiful. I love the idea that Conan stays as Conan and how his firends all aceept him that way...him and Ran deserve each other forever...
aya143 chapter 3 . 5/8/2007
i feel for conan and ran. they're in a crazy, tough situation, but true love conquers all.
aya143 chapter 2 . 5/8/2007
sorry, got way too into the fic to even comment before! lol. great job so far!
psychedelic aya chapter 3 . 10/29/2006
That was utterly beautiful. Just, well, beautiful. I loved the way the plot went-the twists, the problems with society, the emotions of both Ran and Shinichi-you wrote it really well. Everything had a nice flow to it, and the way you made the characters discussed the discrimination concerning the marriage of Ran and Conan made it very real-world-ish realistic. (That's repetitive, isn't it? Haha.)

Anyway, this was brilliant. I loved it to bits. (Faving it, of course.) Fufufu.

And you know what? Ran dating Kaito is a plus! (Because I'm a secret KidxRan shipper when it all comes down to it. *is shot*) Haha.
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