| Reviews for The Next Great Adventure |
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   Redwing1co chapter 20 . 7/24 Just finished all chapters and enjoyed it hope you continue the story thank you so much |
| mackiechandler chapter 8 . 5/4 please fall in love with Luna |
| mackiechandler chapter 6 . 5/4 You realize she is going to kick his butt from here to Stonehenge and then back again |
| csheila chapter 20 . 1/25 Thanks for sharing what you gave us. Fantastic story with a lot of options |
| csheila chapter 19 . 1/25 Yep, he needs training. True about newspaper |
| csheila chapter 18 . 1/25 Great battle scene |
| csheila chapter 17 . 1/25 Captain. Takes initiative but knows angles and protects me. Lieutenant could be just a recent grad. Like Ivan a lot. |
| csheila chapter 16 . 1/25 Plot makes sense. Hate to lose contact with others but it’s understandable. He better be nice with Luna |
| csheila chapter 15 . 1/25 Like it, including how everyone yells at him. Interesting meeting. |
| csheila chapter 14 . 1/25 Very entertaining. Terrible way to blow assignment |
| csheila chapter 13 . 1/25 Cliffie but understandable point. Really similar to 5 (not ever sure she fully healed) Love the OC’s |
| csheila chapter 12 . 1/25 Oh this such a great idea. But he needs to get rest of the 5 out of there. |
| csheila chapter 11 . 1/25 Love it. Ruthless and to the point. Impressed with your Ron (really all the kids) So glad he took out Snape |
| csheila chapter 10 . 1/25 Like I said he got too cute. |
| csheila chapter 9 . 1/25 Oh boy, sometimes Harry can get too cute. But he is a kid |
