Good story. Wish you hadn't swelled on coffee so much and it did kind of drag in some parts, but overall it's worth reading. I do admit to scrolling quickly forward in many places. Still, I am glad I read it.

Mcgee abd ziva should do paper work to they hardly did leg work that was all gibbs and tony

Ugh get on with it already stop dragging it on and on and on

Well done !

Engaging plot, true to self characters, and no plots holes. I hope you kept writing.

I know it has been years since you wrote this story but I just found it and I wanted you to know that I loved it and now I am going to read the sequel. Thanks so much for sharing it.

Fantastic story, I love the relationship you have them building. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Okay, Myers has either escaped or someone, Jim maybe, is in on the drug smuggling. Just feels like there is more drama to come. This scenario reminds me of Walker texas ranger episode where they went rafting not knowing they had escaped convicts with them.

Still good. Gibbs has been sitting in the same position for hours and hours. It's not going to be that easy for him to move.

Still good but you went way overboard on Tony's jobs.

Good story. It would have made more sense if their relationship was advertised as strained and the raft trip was a re-connecting bonding kind of thing. Maybe Tony's mom, Gibbs' wife had died and the two, without any other close family, decided they needed to try harder. It would have made it easier for Tony to say father instead of worrying about using dad.

Absolutely loved it, the coffee part was a nice touch

Beautiful fic, I loved it!

This was good, especially for your first story. I could kinda tell, mainly just with little things though. But like with all other things, writing gets better with experience, so the important thing is to keep writing. You did a great job with this! You managed to incorporate a case, some angst, a little drama, family/team/friend bonding, and humor all into one. I was laughing through the majority. Yes, certain parts seemed a tad OOC, but not overly so. You kept them in character well, and I could picture everything. Loved the banter and bond between Gibbs and Tony, and the Tony/Abby and Gibbs/Ducky talks. It was certainly worth the read. :)

amazing story and you to a degree stuck to the original storyline of tony dinozzo though needs a little improvement but all in all great

Since I started reading NCIS fanfiction a few years ago, I have now read this story five times (I think), I know I favourited it the first time, but I may not have reviewed because I find that usually a pointless thing to do, but you deserve this. If you willingly re-read a story and consistently enjoy it each time then it is a damn good story.