Not going to lie I really liked this story, it was clever, it was an interesting concept, and I greatly enjoyed it, right up until you killed Ginny, that and the subsequent chapters ruined a great story. The real shame to me is that good Harry and Pansy stories are very rare, and long ones are practically non existent, aside from White Knight and Grey Queen I can really think of very many.

"ONE this side of the wards is a small grove. We will Apparate into that, and MEAT here"

One? Meat?
Ok, given that this is a verbatim quote from Bellatrix, is the author insinuating that she suffered Brain Damage during here incarceration in Azkaban?

of course the whole, harry never decides to bake crushed glass into the dursley's meals never did make sense to me

harry's so noble he won't sleep with a girl is also barf worthy

Yes, there may be a dozen or so errors or potential errors in this, but it is still a great story.

Hope to read others you have written

Keep writing as life allows

It's 2017 and there's been no new chapters since april of 2015 so... I'm guessing this is abandon? I really was enjoying this story. Here's hoping you get a chance to finish it in future.

Seems you forgot to take out one of your personal notes during the writing process in this chapter.
(... Greyback had disappeared, except the ones around (Get map of Britain, find town of 2-300 population, fairly isolated and near mountains or woods.) He thought ...)
and then again here.
(... and grew, becoming a map of (Whatever town) and everyone looked at it. "We have a few theories about what's going on, but this morning, word came that ...)
Probably a good three or four others too that are all based on that missing information.

I'm a bit confused here. Harry casts spells while he's leaving for the park, then he remarks on how it must be nice to be 17 and able to cast without the ministry coming down on you... Why did he cast earlier if he's aware he'll be getting in trouble, or at the least if he believes he'll get in trouble for it?

In 2017, figures like Ron and Ginn Weasley are really out of character. That's a problem with your story

when i first read your title, i thought it said something about fifty shades of grey

I truly enjoyedthis story and will Follow it hoping you ccomplete it.

A lot of you writers do seem to not be able to Finish your story's, just have to live with it I suppose. Good story spoils by the absence of the last chapter.

Uh, i thought it would be an interesting story, but matching Harry with a slut ? I'm out.

This is a very good story even though I am NOT a Ginny/Harry fan. Mainly because Ginny had always been the number one fan girl and believed all those stories written about him. The only ones that had ever seemed to see Harry as a person and not some myth was Hermonie and Luna.

i actually like your pansy character in this ..Pity she wont be in the main new story..Great story anyway..

Great work so far !