Another good read of mystery, adventure, action and a little romance!

And I love how you wrote and describe your characters!

great story...sorry for reading it so late though

Great story! Enjoyed reading it. There were some great twists in it! So sad that Agent Marrow died. And Johnny. Wonder what mystery they'll run into in the Bahamas. ;)

Great twist!

poor johnny (and his family)! too bad he couldn't have made it out alive somehow.

great name for this chapter! really enjoying this story!

I love Golden Retrievers. They are so uber-friendly and always seem to have a smile on their muzzle.

Awwww

wow what? that's actually kind of sad. I like your Randy

"Do you?" Nancy asked. "Have any of you ever lost your memory?"

All three men shook their heads.

Fun fact: that's not true. In one of the early Hardy Boys Mysteries, Joe gets beaten in the head with a shovel while working for his dad by himself in Colorado. He wakes up covered in blood, nearly drowns, and can't remember his own name. Frank comes to the rescue and Joe thinks he's the terrorist that killed Iola. I think it's called "Brother Against Brother" it's part of the casefiles that came out with the ND series that contains "Black Widow"

No offense but...you suck. Cliff hangers! Why do you like them do much?!;)

Good story. I have a hard time believing that a) Frank would have allowed Nancy to go with Agent Phelps when they split up at the gala, and b) that Frank would have left Nancy alone at the car while the rest checked out the hideout of the guy who supposedly had kidnapped her and tortured her. Otherwise, I enjoyed the rest of the story. Exciting.

Um, what happened to the guards that were posted to her room?

well, i don't know much about relieving coughs. if i did, i wouldn't be in the same boat you're in!

i guess it's not a cliffie.. but still this is a pretty sad :( (sorry but that's supposed to be a sad/crying face-usually i just click on whatever emoticon my email supplies me with)