Reviews for Inner Turmoil
Daki92 chapter 4 . 8/19/2011
Aww, that was so preciously adorable lol. Good story
Zorian chapter 4 . 4/10/2008
Very sweet ending. Thank you for writing this. I hope in the future you have a chance to write another DS fic. Until then. Take care.

~Zorian
Zorian chapter 3 . 4/10/2008
Bumbling idiots indeed...Beautiful depiction of each character so far. Definitely liked the ending of this chapter.
Zorian chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
Definitely interested...Shego actually showing a part of her weakness that is not really shown...well...never shown in her character. Good job.
Eienvine chapter 4 . 11/3/2007
Yay! I heart Drakken and Shego. And that's totally the kind of fight I can see them getting in, too. Great fic!
SeeTheFall4 chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
This is the first Drakken/Shego fic I've really read. I think it's awesome! ) I really enjoyed reading it. Good job!
CastaS chapter 4 . 3/5/2007
i enjoyed reading it. great one.
Pyric chapter 4 . 3/5/2007
I'm smiling, just so you know.

You made me smile.
Pyric chapter 3 . 3/5/2007
Aww!

So cute!

Yeah, I don't feel like being useful this chapter. You'll have to settle for exclamations like

Aw!
Pyric chapter 2 . 3/5/2007
I like this very much. The fact that Shego actually cares something for Drakken strikes me as odd, because I've always sort of thought of it as she sticks around for...well, I don't really know why...but this is really something interesting. I like how they both actually care for each other - and that Drakken is a horrible doctor. Haha. If the story wasn't already complete, I'd ask for more dets on Shego and Kim's battle, but maybe there are more in the next couple of chapters.

Anyway, very nice work.
Pyric chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
Heh, I actually really liked that.

Like, really.

It was slightly dramatic (not sure that's the right word for it but anyway) and kind of cute, and I really felt it.

Nice job! It was short but not too short and it was very enjoyable.
Sielbee chapter 4 . 3/2/2007
Okay, I'm trying again, because I got some sort of message saying my review was rejected, and I don't know whether it went through or not.

Anyway, this is a really nice story, and I think you did a pretty good job with the characters. The ending was really sweet. I really enjoyed reading it.
creativetoo chapter 4 . 3/2/2007
This was a really nice story...and I really enjoyed the closing chapter.

Looking forward to reading more of your stories.
PoisonousAngel chapter 3 . 11/19/2006
This is pretty cute so far. I hope you get to updating soon. Please!
sunniedaysmiles chapter 3 . 9/23/2006
I think Shego is a little out of the loop here. Looks like Drakken is almost point-blank laying out a map of how much he really does care. Maybe Shego will get it when the pain wears off... Great chapter!
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