Okay... I kind of what to know if Marik will change for Malik after seeing how Bakura reacted to Ryou being stolen and when they found them. That and Malik kind of back talk him. Nooow to read your other storie on YuGiOh!

Read this story again
Still hits me in the feels..good story. Love it..

This story felt like a novel the way it was written. All the characters were written well. I ended up crying through the last two chapters. Really couldn't stop reading this fic. This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. Enjoy e it alot. Keep writing, you're really good.

I was screaming at Marik in my head I don't know what I was saying though probably something about him leaving like that!

Omg loved it... even though u wrote this like 10 years ago it's still sooooo good

This has a lot of romance, with actoin, and I doint know. So keep writing you might become famous!

Warning this is a comment!
Ryou: save me super guy
Kiboshi: no
Ryou: your a dick
Dark Pki: the inony

Very good Story read the Entire thing on my phone at 2:00 am thank you for a great Read

I loved it :)

I'm not sure what I think of this.

It was well written, and I enjoyed the first couple chapters...

But I found the selling of Malik to Bakura really disturbing...along with the events that followed.

Nice job keeping Bakura and Ryou mostly in character, especially in the first chapters.

Thanks for posting.

-Darkelf

YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Hope everglade here! this story is soooooooooooooo cute! i love it dude! i hope u write more!

Holy shit...that was the biggest plot twist ever. Well, it threw ME for a loop, and I truly don't get surprised by much. Beautiful job though, m'dear. w

I'll shut my word hole and continue reading now. :P

This is an amazing story! I read it the first time and had to sit down and read it again. However, I totally spaced out on what the title was, so it was a while later that I remembered and then I found it again. Best story I've read for a long time. Then I found out there was a sequal and read that one, too. AMAZING! Do another! :D

iv readed this story before its so heartbrecking it made me cry 5 times write a nother story plaese

Beautiful. i have got to say this is one of the best stories i have read on this site and i have read ALOT of fanfics. By the way i love the way you described the little room there... and ryou a whore? well that is a little out of character, don't you think? But nice twist though. Keep up the awesome writing and don't forget to update Deluge! loved it and i was devastated when it ended.

~Sarina the She demon :)