I don’t suppose there’ll be any more...

This whole fic is just about making Naruto a weak retard who gets tormented by nearly everyone, still smiles at them, gets killed because of them and even in a disguise, is still retarded enough to come back to konoha and talk civilly with them all. It's just unrealistic. You named this story in such a manner that I thought it would be about a darkish Naruto who hated konoha. I thought even after his death, that would be the endof the konoha chapter in his life but no, you had to put him there again.

The Hokage needs to do his role as the leader of his village. Because if the whole village including the repected ninja clans were disobeying him then he needs to change that. And him making lies to a child about his mental condition was even worse, he should rather explain the truth to him and just made him swear not to listen to the fox and always come to him for advise. I remember in canon, Yamanaka really didn’t like him as shown from Inoichi’s attitude when Naruto went to Nagato’s hiding place after he defeated the last Pain. After all of Naruto’s heroics, Inoichi was still showing how he was higher in ranks and was a bit arrogant when he talked to Naruto. That was why I don’t like the Yamanaka’s coz they felt superior.

As for Anko, I don’t really like her for Naruto because first the age gap and then she’s violent which is bad for his mental health. But at least just portray her as a snob and uncaring but not mean to a child.

And last Naruto, even for a child his age, he would know when people were nice or not. Still after being beaten to death, he should not maintain a good attitude towards those mean people. He may not know or experience love but he should be an expert when it comes to hate. It’s what he gets everyday from others. And most kids tattle tell by the way.

Coolio. Can't wait for more.

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

IT'S BEEN 8 FUCKING YEARS BRO. WAKE THE FUCK UP FROM THIS ALMOST DECADE-LONG HIBERNATION AND GET BACK TO FUCKING WORK ON THIS FANFIC!

this story is stupid im sorry to be blunt but it is its just interesting thats it not good or bad its just stupid

Who is this Arashi person of which you speak? I really want to know who this Arashi person is that people keep mislabeling as Naruto's father.

Last I heard Naruto's old man is Minato. Minato Namikaze.

And yet another chapter filled with Naruto getting his ass tortured. Seriously, don't you get tired of writing this crap? I don't care if he has the will of fire or a strong mind. It's physically and mentally impossible for anyone to retain a smile after getting treated the way Naruto has. Either that, or Naruto really is mentally retarded and he thinks that the villagers are nice to him when they are cutting him up. You're bashing on the entire village of Konoha for what reason? For some stupid mass miracle that the Death God will appear and give Naruto magic powers and destroy Konoha. There, just summarized the entire ending even though I didn't read it yet and the story isn't even finished yet. Don't read this smut gentlemen, unless you're lower than the age of 9, don't read it.

Horrible grammar aside, this story makes no sense at all. Terrible cliches and predictability is prevalent throughout the first few chapters. Story is 2/10. Character development is an astounding 0/10. Dialogue and grammar is 3/10. Overall, this story wouldn't be something I'd recommend. Even with a gun to my head.

You don't like Naruto x Anko but you didn't have to make Anko such an asshole. You didn't even give an explanation as to why she immediately attacked him because he tried to defend her. Asshole.