Reviews for Kel & Dom: 50 Themes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORYY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just, I just can't even express how much I love you-and this story-right now. It's just, it's just, so amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() soo cute 3 |
![]() ![]() I love it, but you have one mistake Dom is a sargent not a captain (did I spell it right?) |
![]() ![]() OMYGOSH! I loved it... I mean you know how to write, and it's just so...(sighs dramaticly)...beautiful. I mean, i wasn't gonna read it based on the smry and title, but them i saw how many reveiws u got, and that's what i go off of, and i'm so glad i read it... (wipe away tear) :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your characterizations of Kel and Dom, and of the rest of the cast. They stay true to the books while the relationship moves on, the romance between the two is sweet. Very nice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So 53 is my favorite line in every TP fanfic on this site, I've decided. Just so you know, about 100 of those views are probably from me. I adore this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm... Lalasa and Tian... I never thought about that, but now that I do, they seem good for each other! After all the men who've hurt Lalasa, it seems like she would go for a girl, and I'm just disappointed that I never thought of that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ep! Beam! Squee! Huggles you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh, that was great i really loved the last one thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() i don't quit understand number 53 but number 52 had me trying not to wake up the rest of the house with laughter(omg my parents and brother sleep so freaking much) this was the perfect mix of humor and fluff YAY KITTIES . |
![]() ![]() ![]() I totally agree with you. KD rox! |
![]() ![]() I LOVE this i hav read the books 5 times each and this is so good THANK YOU now the story is perfect |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this, and I don't often say this, so consider yourself highly complimented. :) You did an excellent job of capturing the essence of the characters. Kel-in-love is a terribly difficult thing to do well, but you really pulled it off, and invented a very convincing side of Dom to go along with it. Most times, when I read a Kel/Dom (not my favourite pairing, so it takes even more to sell me on it) I feel constantly jerked out of the story when I stumbled across something that jerks the reaction "She/he would never do/act/say something like that"- however, there was only one or two moments in your story when I felt slightly unsure about a character, and the rest of the narrative just -worked- so well that it was more than enough to keep me in the "realm" of the story you created. All in all, congrats on a job well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *squeels for the first time ever* wow- i swear you just brainwashed me into actually considering giving more romantic stories a shot. . this was awesome!~ keep up the great work! |