I so love it write mroe

Very good. I like it a lot. But there are a few places where the word used doesn't quite fit, or is misspelled. Do you have a good beta? If you want one, feel free to contact me at . My English teachers have always enjoyed having me in their classes, since I'm a natural with grammar, spelling, and creativity-especially in phrasing. I randomly find different ways to say things. It's a habit of mine. Friends and my younger brothers have been known to come to me for help with their homework if spelling, grammar, or punctuation will be graded. Plus, I've done a small creative writing poetry assignment for a classmate for $5 in half an hour. She paid me promptly, I printed it out for her, and it was turned in the next class period. She got an A on it, if I remember right. Made her quite happy.

Sorry, I'm rambling. But the beta offer is sincere. I'm already co-author and beta for two collaboration fics with one of my friends, am writing several more fics and acting as my own beta, have been asked to beta fics for a few other friends, and, although for most it would be a heavy workload, I'm a real wiz with reading and writing. I have free time to spare if you need it. Plus, I'd enjoy seeing it early. *mischievous wink and a quick grin*

I really like this story and wanna read what happens next, so please update soon! )

Your style is very particular and I love it. You should continue, there's nothing better than finishing a story...

OMG! i so frickin' luv this fic! seriously, i'll like, die, if you dont update! will you? plzplzplz? i'll be forever in your debt! Was duo friends with the guard that got moved? i cant wait to see more of wufei... plz update?

it'd be awesome if you would update soon :) it's been some time since you updated. love this story :)

Love the story! I must praise u on ur writing style, it has me visualizing every little detail! Not many stories manage to do that!

Update soon!

PS: I wud also like to know wat the fox reference is for .

good chapter!

update soon.

i cant wait to

see what happens next!

-evilgoddess1990 loves ya

Looks like it's been awhile. Must be time for another chapter. You so left us hanging. And just when things were getting...interesting.

Duo is not a virgin anymore? HOw disappointing :S Hate this T_T I wanted Duo to be Heero only. Can't you make him almost non-virgin? like Wufei wanted to make love but in the end didn't cause they are bot uke? *hopes* Anyway, love to read this and i can't wait to see more now that they have kissed. Looking forward to more H :p Thanks for writing this fanfic.

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Thank you so much for updating and for writing another great story.I can't wait till the next update .So please update again soon. If you keep writing I'll keep reading.

great great story so far! i totally love the 1x2 and i really hope you keep goign with it because it's getting really good hehe! idk where you want take it but it seems like you can go really far with the whole prince falling for his protector idea. awesome job! keep it up

Really good so far and i hope this does turn into a x rather then staying at a , lol. I'm into 1x2 too, though i do enjoy the occasional 2x1. really good story, like i said, can't wait to read more, update soon 'kay

Wow. Totally love this story. Just saw it for the first time yesterday. So good! I love how intimidating Heero is. He is steamy hot! I love Duo. He is just so amusing, I can't help but to love him. Hate Relena with a passion! I could never stand her, not even in the series. Great story. I am so excited that they kissed. I can't wait to see what happens next. That will definitely be interesting. Keep up the great work and good luck on the next chapter.

love the story! oh ptitty plz put the next chaptor up soon! i HAVE to read it! lol _