This was nice.

I hope you make a seguel to this or a follow up story. It would be nice. Apart from this you did great on this one and i am afraid i have to agree with your opinion on each turtle. It quite suited them how you described them.

This was way too cute- April's thoughtful comparisons of each turtle was spot on, and just sitting bonding with Raph was too perfect, not to mention a relationship rarely explored (at least, to my knowledge) and basically, very well done!

Nice. I like the fact that she told Raph. It'll come back to him at interesting times and make him reflect when he would otherwise dismiss. Great fic.

i love the comparisons! they are so spot on

Seriously I love with this story and your musings on the turtles! Really great dialogue and you really capture the relations between the turtles well. Even if just through glances and wisecracks between Leo and Raph. But your way too harsh on Donnie! He doesn't fight as much as the others occasionally because he's usually doing something more important for the storyline!

what an awesome story. I don't know what else to add... it was just really great and totally spot on.

I really liked this story. Not what I was expecting at all, but I loved it!

reminds me of a fic I read once

Mikey and Usagi were sitting next to each other in meditation and Mikey was thinking about the anatomy of Usagi, unfortunately all he knows about rabbit anatomy is from the rabbits he's eaten, so when Usagi asked him what he's thinking he truthfully replied "Cooking and eating you"

but this fic was really cool

I love it

Love Leo's confusion at the end... Great conversation and keep well in the spirit of the characters. Enjoyed it much :)

I just have to tell you that I've read this a number of times and I really enjoy it every time. I still think of this story when I watch the movies every know and then. I can easily see this kind of a conversation happening convincingly. Well written and well done! :)

love it, very cool.

I love it! It's a character study hidden within a very amusing one shot. April is a hard character to pin down (for me, at least). You're good at this.

Heehee, funny, cute I love it!

You forgot one, Donnie's good with a stick!

Well, this was pretty darn cute! Splinter's going after Raph!