Reviews for In A Galaxy Far Far Away
Talonis Wolf chapter 1 . 8/25/2017
This is well written, sir! Thank you for writing this and sending my mind on all sorts of "what ifs"- part of me is glad you never continued this, because now I'm imagining all sorts of crazy shenanigans- I am particularly amused by how the IOA would react to Harry and Ron, especially Richard Woolsey.

Thank you for this gem- it far exceeds anything I could currently write.

Sincerely,

~Talonis Wolf
Locket1 chapter 1 . 6/26/2017
Shame there is no more. wonder if this will get worked on? Wip's are so sad, it has such potential.
Netchka chapter 1 . 2/9/2016
Cool storyline start. I hope you can continue this fic at some point in time. :)
JoWashington chapter 1 . 3/20/2015
NO update since 2006?! Come ON! This was just getting good!
grimmich chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
hmm interesting :D
jabbarulez chapter 1 . 9/25/2014
and the ferret returns! lol! I wonder how long it'll take nerva to summon Hermione?
cft chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
Possibly the best HP X SGA I have read, I really enjoyed it, thank you!
Rainbow2007 chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
love it. When are you going to update this story.
Harry James Potter-Cullen chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Its beautiful continuous
blackdisk chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Published in 06 well you certainly were right about slow updates...
Great story though! I would love to see this continued.
Regin chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
I Love, I Like, I Lust!Please Update Soon!
Elvin Master Assassin chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Are you continuing this story? I ask because i really enjoyed it and hope that there is more
droga1 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
I see that you are still using fanfic, is it possible to update this or is this story abandoned. Would be sad if it is, since this looks like it have a good premise.
Amyethious chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
please continue its really good with a strong plot so far please
Lord-Drakos chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
This was going so well until a wraith somehow ended up in the atlantis gate room, and all of the trained soldiers just stood around and did nothing.

For one thing a wraith ship would have been detected long before it even came close to the planet, and there's no way a single dart covered the distance on its own, so there would also be a cruiser or hive in orbit.

Secondly we've clearly seen atlantis soldiers shoot wraith on sight, hostage or no hostage, they wouldn't stand around chatting with a wraith that has somehow breached their defences.

And lastly, Harry's dialogue is a bit dry and out of character during the encounter.

This isn't meant to be a flame, just some pointers on what you should edit to help the story along.
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