Reviews for Grail
BookWolf369 chapter 1 . 2/14/2017
lol
Siera-Knightwalker chapter 1 . 2/20/2016
Ya know, gaminin is like kami-nin with g for genin. That reminds me, wasn't he genin at that age? Whatever. Corrections- Naruto's fatjer's name is Minato Namikaze. Naruto's mother's name is Kushina Uzumaki. Sasuke's mother's name is Mikoto Uchiha. Sasuke's father's name is Fugaku Uchiha. Minato is not who Naruto gets his personality. Its from his mother. And Minato was friends with Fugaku, and Mikoto with Kushina. And the Hokage is not allowed to leave the village, unless it is to fight a huge threat or something because the Hokage is the village's last line of defense.
Kiboxful chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
I just want to say I love this trilogy of sorts he he, I love how it all worked out doe I would really love to see a few more chapters of Naruto's life now that he has a family, I know that it would be a mission and a half to write, with having to come up with your own stroy line and new or exsisting character's having new plot points and such but it would be nice to see Naruto... happy for once you know, it would nice to see Naruto married, as well as the rest of team 7. I of course don't want to come across as a fan of your work, who seem's to be wanting more then what you have written, I do very much enjoy how the story has ended and I guess the best part is that at least our imagination can fill in the blanks. From a forever lasting fan Kiboxful
yet again chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
:)
Enji and Evan chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Ahahahaha!
I rea your other ones as well.
You have a great plot!
Burnzs chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Boy, that was a great story. It made me smile through the whole thing. Again, the constant appearances of typos was very very frustrating. You know, its spelled "plowed" not "ploughed" also. At first I actually thought she called him sweaty when he woke up. I am only assuming you meant sweety, though.

Anyways, great story. i definitely enjoyed reading it and it definitely brought a smile to my face.
cariangelus chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
I loved loved all three stories they were really good, ahhhhhh happy endings.
Laesk chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
a nice set of series. thank you for the read. i much enjoyed the time travelling Naruto with his team. thanks
Rasei chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
I love all three of your series. They are all well-written and fun to read.
hoigui chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Beautiful wrap up. Loved the triligy you are truley a splinded writer
pupupudding chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
LOVE THE SEIRES OF STORIES! AWESOME! BRILLIANT! I WISH I WOULD GO ON BUT !LOVEED IT BIRLLIANT JOB!

Your complametning fan,

singing and dancing chicken fan
aero13 chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
*claps* i read and loved the whole series! id be cool to have like a story for the next generation
Narue-Nara-chan chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
So sad it ended. It was a great story! Funny with lots of adventures and cute moments. The only thing I don't like, its the sensation that your Naruto is equal to Superman or Goku... The 'I can make everithing alright without problem *good guy pose*' *shudders*. But I really loved your fic, I would like to see a 'Happy Uchiha Familly' side story, but I think I can fantasice with an angry Sasuke chasing a little boy down... Followed by an angry Itachi... Fun.

Thank you!
Crystalzap chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
LOL GREAT ending, AWESOME story i read all 3 and

i loved them all! you should keep writing :)
JayceeRising chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
hahahahahahahahahahaha!

i can't stop laughing!
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