Reviews for Serpent Rose |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Still interesting. You may want to fix the first two chapters, as they are identical. Super power dark Harry has quite the network going. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed reading the chapters very much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh this is really good! please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool and please update soon. |
![]() ![]() the story line itself seems really really good,i just have a very hard time following it. your writing is too unclear and most of your diction is unncessary. simple is better, your trying to hard. update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *grins* Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it, my only question is did when did ginny and harry bond. since her eye's flashed like the other two i's guessing she is bonded to him and what does being bonded allow them to do. thank you. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start! This is written much better than the person who either stole your chapter or you stole hers... Either way, it's good! Keep writing it and update soon! |
![]() ![]() This story is great so far please continue |