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"You and me, Quincy, we're wiping the bastards out." - best line ever.

Amazing. Renji/Ichigo is one of my favourite pairings and you captured their personalities well.

I feel so sad for Ichigo, it was nicely written though, you captured their personalities well.

I loved the last line.

I really loved it! Poor Ichi-kun.

wow. it's really nicely written. only it just whetted my appetite more. poor ichigo. it's really hard when your feelings are not reciprocated.

Oh gods

I don't even know what it was about this that was so good, but it was. It was fan-fucking-tastic.

I'm all jelloid! You've made me go wobbly!

Wow. Possibly my all time favourite Renji/Ichigo fic ever.

Good job!

- rosie

Never thought of that as an obstacle before, their age difference and how young (therefore easy) humans are to fall in love...wow, that was awesome writing! Love this fic!

Nicely done! You handle the first person POV extremely well. I especially love the beginning when Ichigo is trying his best to rationalize his behavior...that definitely felt very realistic and in character. And you nail the adversarial kind of chemistry that Ichigo and Renji have. On to the sequel!

I'm always a little uneasy about reading fanfiction from first person pov because I feel like it's a lot harder than the norm. But you pulled it off ridiculously well. Both of them were great, and in character- which is wonderful- and not wussy at all- which is wonderful. I applaud you.

I can really see Renji's and Ichigo;s relationship starting this way. I like how you portrayed their feelings for one another. There's even a hint of humor which I enjoyed. Thank you for posting this. Can't wait to read any other stories you've written.

I really really really like this story! You captured them perfectly. Well done!

That was flipin awesome

THATS SUCH AN AMAZING STORY! i love the way they interact! its so much more real and manly! hah hah! Onto the sequel!

Poor Ichigo...

Loved how you brought up the difference in that Ichigo is human and it's easier for him to fall in love, as opposed to death gods who's lived for hundreds of years. Never thought of that before, good job!