| Reviews for Drifting Asleep |
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   Brisalad chapter 1 . 11/19/2014 this is so sweet, you write another chapter :) |
| Eve chapter 1 . 4/1/2013 I love the ending! So cute and fluffy! |
| randommonkeyz998 chapter 1 . 12/25/2012 XD love it! |
| kyunggy chapter 1 . 8/17/2012 AWWW |
| AjsusbxI'msj chapter 1 . 11/2/2010 lol i like the ending "want to explain that?" "hormones" good enough for me" |
| KageOkami-Kogo chapter 1 . 6/30/2010 LOL! The sly dog! XD nice one |
| smc1214 chapter 1 . 1/24/2008 Love how Aang was like 'hormones?' HUH! Very funny, and cute! |
| Ur w0rst niightm4r3 chapter 1 . 10/7/2007 “Hey Katara, I’m really tired, so I’m gonna hit the sac, night”said Aang. I think it's "sack." You could use more detail, but I'm so glad that I found someone else on this website that uses semi-colons. You missed a bit of puncuation. “Your face, your...your blushing?” The second "your" is actually supposed to be "you're" because it is a contraction of 'you' and 'are'. The ending was really cute, and I think it suited the idea without going into tonsil hockey (which I can't play because MY tonsils were removed when I was five!) It's good that you got across the idea of sexual attraction without the lime/lemon thing ruining the cuteness and innocence. This is, seriously, one of the better "Katara gives Aang 'The Talk of Doom'" one-shots I have read. Kudos. |
| Nyrick chapter 1 . 11/17/2006 I loved it! |
| Mcwheeler12 chapter 1 . 11/5/2006 I loved it! It was so funny :D |
| Death's-Razor-Blade chapter 1 . 10/23/2006 that was great! update ASAP. |
| NeverBreakXPact chapter 1 . 10/10/2006 lol little sneak. It was cute |
| ScarUnfortunate chapter 1 . 10/10/2006 lol cute! I really like it! proceed! |
| FairyGardenCorgis chapter 1 . 10/10/2006 Aw! That was so sweet! Reading this made my heart happy. |
| frozenheat chapter 1 . 10/8/2006 Oh Aang you cheecky little devil! Loved this to bits the kataang was awesome! |
