Reviews for The Pataki Suicides
Leen Ananzeh chapter 2 . 4/19/2019
I'm crying... it's raining... I stayed up the whole night... reading about suicide... this hit me hard
HaliXAlice chapter 2 . 6/23/2015
OMG I LOVE YOUR WORK SOOO MUCH! You always know just what to say and how to make your work! I LOVE IT! X3
ClementineSparkle chapter 2 . 8/13/2013
Oh MY GAWD, girl!
lol sorry. This is an amazing piece of writing! OMG you've got a gift!
Sea-Glasses chapter 2 . 3/8/2013
so sad...
yet so beautiful.
I wish it would be longer. Very emotional. I am really impressed with how you can combine romance with sad/dark/emotional. You're a wonderful writer.
One of the best Helga fanfic I've ever read.
Jennie-Blossom chapter 2 . 8/4/2012
:(
Helga! He loved you too! But it was too late.

This was good,
Myriamj chapter 2 . 6/23/2012
Its a good history, but is very sad. You are a good writer.
Helga Gee Pataki chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
Dark...yet stunningly beautiful. Nice job!
Light Aria chapter 2 . 2/14/2010
Terribly sad. :(
BunniGirl chapter 2 . 1/23/2010
;_;

so.

sad.

But I seriously wish it was LONGER!

-BG
Vampire Muffins chapter 2 . 6/12/2008
Aww. This Is such a good story.

Very VERY emotional.

In fact, I cried.

Hope you make another capter!
Mimi chapter 2 . 6/19/2007
That was pretty good. The Virgin Suicides is a great book/film (have you read the novel?). It was nice reading something inspiried by it. I wish it would've been longer, though.
inthemusicbox chapter 2 . 10/10/2006
Gah! I haven't visited the HA fandom in ages! I even retired all my old ( crappy ) stories frmo 2003. This story makes me regret that decision.

So beautifully eerie..an instant favorite..and I shall be visiting the section of HA more often, thanks to you, and hoping to see more from you.

Lovely done. Nice to see a tragedy every once in a while :) Happy writing!

-Serenity