| Reviews for Preoccupation |
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   ae2000x chapter 1 . 11/26/2019 oh HO HO hoh! |
| laviere chapter 1 . 6/27/2019 This is the funniest shit I've ever read. You're a really good writer. |
| Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 7/24/2016 Ha! Sokka gets the first girl he meets his age and Katara, naughta... XD I loved this! This is totally me! |
| MargotTenser chapter 1 . 9/24/2015 I love how Zuko approaches kissing the same as he does everything else. With admirable dedication, bumbling, and hilarious humorlessness. This made me smile. |
| Lumosify chapter 1 . 6/6/2015 An interesting take XD and Mai with just the right amount of emotion. You wrote this brilliantly. |
| rumea chapter 1 . 1/29/2015 This is so well-written! And cute kind of awkward Zuko and Mai being sarcastic and badass! |
| Carolnuts chapter 1 . 12/13/2013 awwwwwwwwww *gush* |
| R2M chapter 1 . 6/30/2013 haha this was great. so funny |
| Boogum chapter 1 . 12/30/2012 LOL! This was brilliantly funny. Definitely going to favourites. |
| Dude chapter 1 . 10/30/2011 I just remembered this story like years later, not even while doing anything ATLA related, and had this just overpowering craving. So I typed into google 'zuko reads maps scrolls inventory mai to look predatory rumpled' because I GD remembered that YEARS LATER. It was even better than I remembered. |
| Lady Viridis chapter 1 . 5/6/2011 Hahaha. Classic. I enjoyed this quite a bit. Awkward teenage romance is always entertaining. |
| woo chapter 1 . 3/23/2011 LOL! This was good! Although you made it seem like Zuko was looking for anyone to kiss and he didn't care who. But this was good since it ended up being Mai and Zuko. ;) Thanks for sharing. Maiko ftw! :) |
| iCe chapter 1 . 10/10/2010 haha their first kiss! :) With teh way they go at it at the show it's evident that they're in their 1000th but anyway, good one. :) Thanks for sharing. :) |
| Mariagoner chapter 1 . 7/14/2010 Smooth, Zuko. Real smooth. ;) |
| SarySoda chapter 1 . 11/7/2009 hopefully she would notice his gagging sounds LOL |
