really and you just left it there? not...very...nice...

Please continue

Great story so far; please continue and finish it!

What have you up your sleeves with the next few chapters? :-D

Poor Serena.

i love this story so much and I wish there would be more updates, now that i am currently writing one i can understand how hard can be sometimes to catch up with everything, work, school, life in general and the story. But I really hope you can have a little tiny time to write another chapter :) awesome job.

I am really happy you updated this story. I thought you were done with the story, but I'm glad you continued! This is a great story - I hope Darien sees Beryl for who she really is, but I hope it isn't too late, because it seems like someone is getting ready to leave California to go back to living with her parents. I think that could be a good thing for her, though. I just wish Darien would come around. I get the feeling he's trying hard to deny his feelings for her by continuing this relationship with Beryl and refusing to acknowledge that he does like Serena.

Anyway, I hope you update. The thing I really like about this story, which you don't find a lot of on here, is the real, raw emotion from Serena. You describe her feelings so well, it makes readers really feel for her. Anyway, great chapter. Seiya - if I didn't hate him before, I REALLY hate him now!

Why is public transit so dangerous? Everyone was freaking out on her like taking the bus would've gotten her killed or something. It's weird and unhealthy of her friends to be so paranoid about taking a bus or walking down the street. Most alleys don't hide lurking rapists after all.

great story so far

is darien going to find beryl cheating on him with his own eyes next time? I hope he ditches beryl and goes out with serena instead.

continue?

Oh man, I'm dying to know what happens next ! Stupid Beryl lying to Darien ! Boo her : ( Hopefully you find time to update this story, i really like it ! Keep up the good work.

great story :) Hopefully you can update soon

Please update i really want to know what happens next. is darien going to learn about baryl? Also i hope he has to work for it to get serena.

omg i started cryin when she said "He truly loves her. Serena’s heart constricted at the harsh reality of her life"