This is REALLY good, keep it up!

Enjoyed this version of what's in Sawyer's head and how you put it into words! Gotta love Sawyer - such a complex guy! Thanks for sharing!

This was good. You definitely got into Sawyer's mindset. I liked it.

Wonderful Sawyer POV. You have him down, great work, I really enjoyed this.

Great work! I love it, you really capture the side of Sawyer we don't see (unfortunately) very often. Would it be too much to ask for more? :)

What a fantastic start...very well written. Love to see more.

Ok wow. I'm a Skater big time, but even if I weren't I'd still think this is one of the like top two fics I've read. It's SO beautiful. AMAZING description, especially when you're describing what she tastes like. It's very Sawyer-ish. Overall, this is pretty much AWESOME.

I to am a supporter of the Kate-Sawyer relationship. this story was beautiful. You explained his emotions so well!

"you taste like strawberries,"

"you taste like fish biscuits,"