NOOO I WANT MORE! GAHALKJHDLISAJHDIJSHO!

Oh this...this is perfection

very touching.

Oooh Iruka-chan your wicked...

i loved kakashi referring to his children as his pups.

continue! this is lovely!

Loved it

Bwahahahah...
Gotta love Huckleberry Finn references.

- Very awesome snapshot story!

make iruka have an amnesia or something :))

I love it...its 'Almost Perfect' _

There're a few typos & misspelling mixed in (like eatable when I hope you mean edible) but otherwise well worth the read especially for chaper 8.

I really hope inspiration hits again so you update soon. Please keep up the great job

After reading this I've decided that chapter 6 is my favourite thing ever! Please for the love of all that is holy, more moments like that xD You're so good at keeping tham all in character, and they work so well as a family! Good job :D

awe! Will you finish this?

Are you going to update this fic?

This is awesome, i love how the four of them make such a cute family. It also shed light on somthing that i've been wondering about forever. How did Naruto and Sasuke raise themselves when their parents were gone. Honestly Naruto was on his own at atleast age 10 and Sasuke been alone since age five. You took that mystery and made it into somthing comical and, had things gone slightly different in the manga/anime, a plausable story. I also love how Naruto and Sasuke are portrayed as loving brothers in this. I just seems right, likes that how it should've went. And their poor traumatized friends, i wonder just how many mental images plagued their minds that day? and the cute little Kakashi flashback in this chapter, how they all functioned as the cutest little family in Konoha was adorable! If there is more to this story i urge you to write it down, this was ment to be shown to the world!