Another story completely ruined by its moron writer. How? Changing things and even breaking your word because of a poll. Let’s put it this way, polls never ever improve a story. Especially when deciding harem members. Harems are beyond stupid to begin with. Any reader who thinks harem stories are the best, are either fucking retarded(this includes teenagers), completely clueless about interpersonal relationships(also includes teenagers), or doesn’t give a damn about their partners and just want to use them(also includes teenagers). Hell I think between those three categories, that’s just about every single male teenager on the planet. But beyond that, readers won’t trust you to do what you say since you don’t keep your word. I refuse to read anything at all written by you. Oh, and you saying you write for yourself? Another lie. Or else you wouldn’t have felt the need to publish this garbage. Nice try liar.

And I’m out because this writer is a moron and a fucking liar. Liar liar liar. Your word is worth nothing and you have zero integrity. Go fuck yourself you honorless subhuman scum. Hope you live abandoned and alone. You’re worthless.

You’re subhuman trash

What a fucking story . I can see only one chapter and full of mistake. U don't even know what is the spelling of sadaime ( sadamane) what is this Mame . If u don't know then don't write.

please update this was the first fanfiction I ever read and I would absolutely love to see this finished

Dude you said you would finish

I wish you will come back and complete this story I want to read it in its complete form

It's a good story so far but I get the feeling that your kinda forcing the romance to happen no real build up I guess you could say

Love this story so far only thing I don't like is naruto just throwing away his headband that he got from iruka sensei that should hold more meaning then that

Little bitch naruto

Sandaime not Sadimame...but I like the word. Sadimame.

Challenge: konoha's hedgehog. The leaf exercise used too little chakra for Naruto so he eventually uses rocks then kunai then swords all over his body. The leaf excersice is taught early. Maybe later chakra strings attached to his skin and the swords to shoot the swords from his body and pull them back easily

Vid vb bc c.f. jn c

I dont agree with Kin having the Rasengan, It doesn't seem/feel right

why not let Naruto and kin move to the old couny of the whirlpool and the 2 raing it like King Naruto and Queen kinlee and the monly Naruto took form the derd mob boss monly and gold shond help him and her run the couny for yers to coming with and te 2 took out the sound and kill all in it . he foundthe ring of ormled and put to the floolr in the mind office to mack men and wamn know who running the couny and hads the power to commed too.