I wish u finished this. I really love it! And u left it at such a cliffy! GRRRR!

It's a really interesting story. You are good with making new twists for the story and I am pleased to notice that as the story goes on the chapters a are becoming longer and you describe things more. I am curious to read about what happens next so I hope that you will write again soon.

o Bad Envy! -glares- lol hurry and update please, this is really interesting (though, I tend to think i'm reading a yugioh chasteshipping fic... sh! lol)

i love this story! u HAVE to update soon!

Please update, you made it so good and u just suddenly stop! )

Omg! Next one soon please!

The last chapter is certainly the best one. Please you haven't update since February, write NOW !

This is really, really, REALLY good and very interesting, I look forward to the next chapter XD

And I love the music you put in XD -is listening to and downloading them now-

~YukinoKara, the sighing cabbage

Well, that's a very interesting story, suspenseful and all. I like it a LOT. Only, either you are not well informed about Ancient Egypt, or you just don't care, but a lot of stuff is historically inaccurate here. Besides that, it's awesome and well-written and I love the plot. I'm waiting for an update!

Very original idea! You seem to updat resonably well and their are little to no grammer/spelling errors You get a 10/10

Dude! I love this story and so can not wait for the next chapter! -Le Gasp!- What is Envy doing?

Aw. So sad. I hope Ed is alright, not to mentio poor Envy.

Aulleluah! new chapter, evil cliffie.

Good job keep going.

Oh now that was just cruel! This is a really cute story and I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!

I agree with blueeyedchibi. It was suprising to see other sins free so early. (Though I don't mind... Greed!