Are everyone just stronger or is sasuke weaker than canon, haku is kage level he was stornger than zabuza, zabuza is kage level, sasuke was kage level at 16 and iruka was only able to get chunin after that long so they dont hold shit next to team nanikoto

In the story the Anbu referred to Iruka as Tora but Tora means tiger in Japanese so is it a typo or...?

'ruka-kun! he was so kind!

did you know fortune cookies were made in america?

No wodner you discontinued, but waht about Kabuto's plan of taking Oto over?

Lol.

If Nanikato didn't go, Orochimaru would have him brought to him.

NOOOOO! You're done with the story? That's not right! Continue please! I'm begging you! Once you finish your schooling that is...

Please tell me! I would love to know, and I am heartfully sorry for your loss! TT Why must the good die!

A truly good tale. It does kind of suck that you discontinued it though; this tale could have become even more epic. Ah well. Thanks for writing this much. At least you didn't commit the arguably greater sin of rushing the end so much it sucked. A summary doesn't count. But this story was good, and nothing can change that.

toboe's dad is kakashi right?

great story luuuuuuv it :DD

there are many original twists in the plot, i've really never heard of clone!naruto.

Wow this story would have been LONG if you finished it. I'm kinda(in a way) glad you summend up the rest of the story.

I admit that I cried a lot in the beginning of the story. I've never read a fanfic that had Naruto actually die so it was kinda shocking. The plot was good though and all the charecters you made were also really well made.

I have to say my favorite line was:

"IT'S THE EPITOME OF YOUTHFUL BEAUTY, KAA-CHAN!" Lien yelled enthusiastically. "MY INNER FIRES SHALL NEVER DIMINISH 'CAUSE I'M KONOHA'S PRECIOUS PINK FLOWER!"

I laughedso hard that I cried.

Thanks for your story!

*sighs* Oh dear, I was terribly disappointed when I read through all those chapters to find a discontinuation notice... even though it said so in your summary. *sweatdrop* But the final overview will have to do. Your story is probably the most unique I have ever read - and one of the most well-written. I find myself unsatisfied yet satisfied with your would've-been ending with the story... and I thank you for writing this.

I am sorry for your loss, and that is all I will say.

OMG I hope I can write a review that makes sense because I am fangirling so hard right now! The way the truth came out and bringing out Haku and his "do YOU have a precious person?" spiel makes this THE BEST CHAPTER SO FAR! XD Then you had to go and bring Zabuza in...I'm squeeing like someone set me on fire and threw a clingy bug on me...and hopefully when I re-review this one day I can managed not to come off as brain damaged and scary but for now...SQUEE!