Dat was a great story ! I really like it

The way this story just relates to my life in high school is just wow. I loved this story. You really gave across the message of how crap high school can be and the extent people go to fit in. Really, this is like reading my own journal. So glad I came across this.

Your writing is so out of this world. I've read a few of your stories in the past, before I even made an account, and I've always loved the detail you add and the natural flow of your writing. I loved the reference to the starts burning out and how Hilary mentions that Kai is probably going to lose who he really is, because it's just so true and these two factors relate so well. Smarty pants for linking them so effortlessly!

This may sound a bit weird but you're kinda inspirational. I would love to be able to write like you.

Have a good day :)

awsome story and its just like me i dont rly fit in so most plp stay away from hurts when ur friends leave u for what they think is something better, but we all live, learn and move on.

Lamb, this story will forever be part of me and I will never ever forget it. It reminds me of my high school years in a way. Except it wasn't about popularity. Anyways I'm just a bit sentimental with the old KaiHil you used to write. I think that this was one of your best stories ever written.

Also I have a favor well not much of a favor to ask but I'll ask you when I catch you on messenger or something so hopefully i'll see you online soon.

Anyways take care!

loves you-angel

Wow, that was very good. Very true, as well. Great job!

that was sad. stupid Kai. lol. Aww my poor Romi! anyways great one-shot lamb...but then again all your one-shots are great...well your writing is great! D and whoever says otherwise can go jump off a cliff.

anyways ...popularity...pftt whatever. Its all so surface stuff and so not worth it. I hate high school too...so glad I'm leaving it. D I especially loved the way you ended it. When he realized that she was never going to be with him again. *breaks into hysterical cries* but his loss.

well once again great story!

luv angel.

You should always try to be who you are, and NEVER let anyone tell you that you are wrong for being that way. Dont' try to fit in if you are born to stand out.

ok, that was random. And im confused, is it a one shot or what? if it is then you should make a sequal

This is something alot of people can realte to (i certainly can) and you';ve manged to write it so beautifully. I love the way you can pick up a scene and it doesnt matter what happen before or after because that scene can tell an entire story. It is an art you have perfected.

I kno exactly what you mean, im a very blunt person to most people and alot of people dont like me for it but thats ok if they cant take me for who i am then they are not that important and i dont really care about them ne wayz this was awesome and again srry for the late review!

That's ... fatastic. I dunno how to say it in words but, it's like ... going up and down. And the end was ... they broke up ? I dunno though. Anyway, that was a great story ... Keep up the good work !

O.o Wow... Hilary seemed so serious, in a mature kinda way... (did that make any sence? I think not! LOL) I nevr thought of kai to become the popular type, she seems to much of a loner (even though all the girl LUB him and tala) *Personally I love Ray more than Tala but that's errelevent right now (-_-;)* I mean it was hard enough for the baldebreakerz to make friends with him... seems a little impossble to me but still very well written. Chalk up another for my favorite stories list LOl it's getting so big now! I love all your stroies (except the yuri, I don't go for that too often... but if I ever do it'll probably be your work that hooks me. Like it did for Kai/MingMing and Tala/Julia (temp fans rock lol)

Yay to the non-popular ones! This is really good. I loved the ending in some sad, maybe slightly saddistic way. Great work... like always!

Howdy!

Well. My shortest review ever I think for any of ur works...coz I personally dun liek KaiHil, but i read it coz u wrote it and I'm impressed again! :):):) u show them ,girl! coz u rock!

Well cya

Masha

ZB

this was one of the most romantic yet tragic stories I've ever read.