That was kinda dark. I can see Tai's selfhate for not living up to what he thinks Hikari deserves. Good job.

So awesome! You should write what Hakari thinks about Taichi moveing out! Taichi is the coolest big brother! I wish I had a big bro like him!

That so SWEET and yet so SAD! This is awesome! Beautiful job! I wonder if everyone who has a younger sibling feels the way Tai does when they have to leave for college or whatever. Man, I don't even want to think about it. Anyway, this is so insightful! And, Tai, I think you're a great big brother, you're not bad at all! You both rock! Keep writing! :D ;D

Absolutely gorgeous. Fits perfectly inside Taichi's poor, confused, protective little head. This sums up his relationship with Hikari so beautifully and poignantly...it's just fantastic. :)

You're story is excellent! I always like to think of Tai and Kari having an extremely close (and rarely existent) relationship. You expressed that well.

Aww, this was really sweet _. I really enjoyed reading it. The idea was original, which is even better. You're a talented writer. I hope you continue to post stories and one-shots!

Also, I'd like to be your beta. I'll PM you with more information.

Once again, great fic!

Stained In Negativity

OMG!I LOVE IT!

I like this story very much! It really shows Tai's behaviour around Hikari so realistic! Great job! I'll add it to my favorites right now!

P.S. What is exactly beta-reading? Is that when someone reads your story before you publish it and makes sure that it is gramatically correct?

Wow, that was a really sweet one-shot. Almost made me cry :)

ah it is cute...

I wouldn't mimd beta-reading for u...but I pretty busy on weekends, but i can squeeze in time...just let me kno if you still need one!

Such a sad story, but so sweet as well. I really liked it. This one's going on my favorites! BL13 out!

P.S. Wish I could beta-read for you. There's two problems though: One is that I'm really busy and two is that I beta-read for my boyfriend and his stories. So, sorry. C ya!