Porfavor... porfavor e leído cientos de historias pero esta sin duda alguna es la mejor se que a pasado tiempo pero si estas vivo y algún día tienes un poquito de tiempo porfa continua con la historia porfa regresa

Fucking naruto he should killed danzou even at that state for god sake... he subjue a kyuubi and danzo is just a kage a fucking oldman don't try to op the oldman its looks crazy and he is the same as hurazen for fuck sake

Cliffy plus a ten-year hiatus seriously

Please continue

Very interesting, the way you describe jimbu's liking for kids and how naruto fight back the seals all the way to the end is very touching

awww.. i wanna read more. huhu.. why stop?

I didn't even know they made dolphin masks! What would that even look like? But his name's Iruka, so you just have to, really.
Nice story idea! It's really original, and I absolutely love it so far. Good job! :D

Please update soon

wow. Amazing story.

*growls* there had better be more soon...

Well, judging by your other stories, you haven't completely given up on fan fics, but is seems you've given up on this story. For one, 6 updates in two years is... bad. Assuming they were evenly spaced, that's one update every 4 months. ANd you haven't updated for over 2 years.

I hope you change that; it's not a bad story.

I wonder how naruto is going to get everyone on his side again. He other naruto sounded like such a brat. I feel so bad for this naruto cause he has to feel the wrath of everone for something he didn't do. I hope naomi won't be as powerful as naruto. It just doesn't seem fair for naomi to get so powerful when naruto has been training 24 years more than her. Anyway, that doesnt really matter too much. I hope the kyuubi from naruto's world comes back soon. Please continue soon!

AWESOME PLOT! I LOVE ALL OF NARUTO'S BEHAVIOUR HERE, though, i skip the other chara parts coz Naruto's part is more interesting to read :/

Really great story hope you will continue writing it.

This is beginning to get... Exciting.

Please. Keep writing! D