AAAAHHHHHHHH IT'S
SO
GOOOOOD
LIKE I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW TO DESCRIBE IT YOUR WRITING IS JUST SO ADVANCED AND PROFESSIONAL AND I JUST
AGGHHHH
MY POOR SHU CHAN

DUDE
AGGHHHHH ITS SO FUCKING GOOD
THE WRITING QUALITY IS JUST SO GOOD I CANT EXPLAIN IT'S JUST LIKE REALLY AFVANCED STYLISTICALLY AND IT'S REALL FULL OF THOSE EMOTIONS MAN
Like HOLY shIT dude
Your descriptive skills are incredible and they really paint a picture. This was like so sad but it's not just your typical sad sack "oh I'm depressed" amateur fit it like feels really mature and so raw and realistic and the description, the emotion, the pain, its all just THERE
I just can't quite put into words how good this first chapter was.

AAAAGGGGGGGHHHGG ITS SO DAMN GOOD

AAGGGGGGGHGHG ITS SO GOOOOD I CANT STOP READING SCREEEEEECH

I don’t even have words for how goddamn amazing this chapter was. Finally we’re getting some backstory! I don’t even know why I loved it so much, it’s just such great writing! Love it.

It was so good! It really made me feel for shuichi and Yuki. And the writing and scenes really enhances all that. The first scene was perfectly written, it hurts, it shows perspective, it’s descriptive. The scene where Yuki and Shu meet again was so sad. I loved the slow pace of their gentle but heartbreaking interactions together. And everything in between was great! Shuichi really does sound heartbroken and the description and use of characteristics is so good. I love it!

I am loving it ! Detailed and descriptive, emotional and imaginative. Knowing that it has been discontinued without an ending is gonna break my heart ...

I have to say that I am guilty of saving my comments until the end of a work. Primarily because otherwise it feels like having to write a "book report" for school. Since this is where it has been dropped by the author, this is where I will leave my comment ...

I truly enjoyed this particular fan-fic, and found it to be emotional, if somewhat wordy, and full of insight. It is a shame that the author only felt the need to write if he/she were petted on the head and told "good job" after EVERY chapter, instead of writing for the joy of writing it's self ! Shame for not finishing what you started.

Have to tell you that I would have reviewed more but I wanted to keep reading so much that I never really thought abut reviewing.

Kind of wish everything was in better order, but I'm still loving the story regardless.

i'm likeing this sooo far but i want more to be updated damn it

Damn. You know I followed this story religiously on guabyteshion, checking for updates when there hadn't been any in months, the other day I was on ff and I remembered this story and has to look it up, I was devastated to read you were discontinuing it.

However I do want to thank you for writing one of my favourite gravtation fan fics, and I was pleased to see a couple of extra chapters from when I last read. I know how hard it is to continue something when it no longer inspires you. I suppose I'll just have to live without knowing if shuichi will ever open up to his friends and eiri and tell them about the tumor, and whether or not he will find the hope he needs to make it through the op.

Xox

I'm in love with this story! ..And didn't know it was discontinued.. so I'm kind of really dissapointed right now.

I think that people only reviewed a few times because they read chapters in a row instead of stopping to review every time. :)

I have been re-reading all of my old favorites on this site and stumbled across this one. Usually I have filters on what I read, I despise an unfinished story, but I was curious how you had finished it, so I searched for it specifically. Much to my horror it remains sadly incomplete, I like the last few chapters you had added before I left. Did you have a idea for how it was to end? I had a few stories I had to have friends of mine finish for me before I left, so I know how hard it is to leave a story and come back to it, especially if no-one leaves reveiws fot encouragement, but I really do want to read the end. Please finish it, I'd be more than happy to beta it for you.

PLEASE UPDATE! THIS IS LIKE THE ONLY STORY I LIKED ON THIS SITE!