This fic is super old now, but I still keep coming back to it as my favorite FFTactics fic, and one of my favorite fics of all time. Years after reading it I just wrote a line that I didn't even realize until right after I wrote it was directly inspired by a scene from this story, and I just wanted to say thanks for writing this and having such an influence on me as a writer.

First, I want to say the pacig of this story is absolutely amazing and also, I liked how you didn't shy away from keeping Ramza's nature as a character during chapter two. After all, it was the time where he is cautious on his true identity for his own personsl reasons of course.

All in all, the story was amazing but halfway through I felt that you rushed it, but you were still able to deliver otherwise. I know you probably won't see this anymore, considering you've been gone for a long time, but I just want to say that you really have a takent for writing and thank you. I've been looking for this kind of fic ever since I finished the game and I'm glad I found yours. I wish you good fortunes, man.
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This will always be my favorite Tactics fanfic. It has been years, but I hope you know that you have written something that really makes an impression on readers. Thanks so much for writing and completing this story.

I really wanna write a Salian one or two shot, with your permission of course. He's so human, even as an OC!

Excellent - looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Fantastic chapter! The betrayal is SO unexpected and you set it up very well. The battle sequences make me respect Agrias more and more. I'm also wondering what has happened to the others who left -and poor Ovelia! :O I can't wait to keep reading - terrific writing!

Nicely written! I'm enjoying the story, and yet I have to admit that I'm wondering what the purpose of including so much detail about their march is. I assume we'll find out soon enough?

Your descriptions and plot development are very good - now back to the story ;)

I'm so depressed I'm finished. I want to have my cake and eat it too, I suppose.

About damn time, you two! I never really liked Meliadoul honestly. Her skills always seemed like a waste of good equipment.

I totally wanted Ramza to give the flower from Aeris to Agrias haha.

Nghhhhh

Hug the shit out of each other, you two! I laughed really hard at the quips a out Ramza having shit lines in the game haha

Ramza is out here putting the moves on Agrias in the shyest way possible. Love it. I also really liked you piercing the veil, talking about being pieces on a board (like when playing the game)!

Agrias, Ramza just wants to understaaaaaaaand. Love those two,and the flirty knights haha.

Agrias and Ramza are so great together. It was an awesome idea to use Agrias as the narrator. She's got a really cut-n-dry view, but as it progresses, you can see her softening!