I loved it. You should more and make it longer

aw, cute story :) good job!

I agree with you; Ace and Luffy together as brothers (especially when they were young) is so cute! x3

So cute...

Hi!

How cute, I love AcexLuffy brotherly fluff. The only thing that I dislike is when they're a couple. I'm not a fan of that. But since this was just brother-ship, I didn't mind reading this. In fact, I loved it!

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Cute! I liked it!

Aw! Man, if I had a brother like Luffy, I'd be so much more mature... although that might not be a good thing.. If I had little brothers like Ace and Luffy, I'd just be a bit cuckoo. But that wouldn't change much...

Anyway, I saw in your review that you had written something with Ace and I was like, WHERE? So I came to look at it... wow I didn't notice this before.

IT'S SO CUTE! It makes me want to have a little brother. Seriously. ... Mom-? *gets ignored* .. never mind.

aw this story is so cute.

That was so sweet and lovely. There really aren't enough Ace and Luffy brother fics out there! This one was great! Well done!

Short, sweet and to the point! Just how a 'LuffyAce Brother-ship' should be!

Blaze, even if that ISN"T a word, at least you know you won't be the only one using it.

Nice job!

Signed R.H.

I really liked this fanfic! Nice job!

Oh the cuteness~ I love this. I can really see this happening! XD Fav.

It's not easy to me to believe that Luffy is afraid of something (exept his Grandfather and Smoker) but this is a FanFic so everything could happen.

I really like this one it's so... Cute. Scared Luffy seeking shelter in his Onii-chans arms. Really Cute :-]

This is just a addon of Japanese-Words-Freak but you could use Ototo (younger brother) instead of bro