Reviews for Deadly Concoctions |
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Qyresh chapter 29 . 9/19/2015 Thanl you so much for this wonderful story. I can't stop smiling from ear to ear :'). Again, thank you for all of your hardwork. I love it so much! |
The Jinxed Pandora chapter 15 . 8/2/2015 This is my one of my favorite yuffentine fanfic |
Guest chapter 29 . 2/19/2015 I really loved this fanfic it was beautifully written and the plot brilliantly executed my only complaint... Is tifa dead? I would also love perhaps a future based epilogue where they of course are living happily ever after. |
DemonKAT chapter 29 . 1/31/2015 Extremely confused having read the whole story in one sitting. -one too many plotholes -lack of clarification (Mara, what she wanted, when vincent fell into a coma, etc) I'd like to say I enjoyed this whole story but the closer to the end it got, the less clear-cut it was and the general direction seemed to be getting lost. |
CupofTeaforAliceandHatter chapter 29 . 1/30/2015 So, glad you finished this. I went back, read from the beginning. This was well worth the wait. I hope you decide to write more stories with this pairing in the future. :-) |
Guest chapter 29 . 1/30/2015 Thank you! A bit rushed (I feel like we were left with some open ends: how did Tifa survive, did Cloud let go of Aerith, how was Vincent accepted as a suitor for Yuffie, Chaos & co. etc.), but I can live with that. It's been a joy to read it, kudos to you :) |
Guest chapter 28 . 1/23/2015 No, a cliffie, how evil of you (but at least it's close enough to the end that one can imagine both a plausible tragic/happy ending). I'd still like you to update, though (hint, hint). I feel like Vincent really played Yuffie in this fic - he rejects her the first time, then gives her hope only to take her virginity and reject her again (I mean make up your mind and leave the poor girl alone). Sometimes I felt like he was crueler than Mara. I love Yuffentine, but Vincent's got a lot of grovelling to do before he's allowed near Yuffie again. I love your Yuffie! She kicks demon/mopey swordsman ass in this fic and seems so strong, considering the physical and mental suffering she's put through. I feel bad for her, though, because everyone treats her so poorly (her father, ugh). While I can understand Cloud's anguish, he was way too harsh on Yuffs (who's the one living a double life with a corpse, ey, Cloud?). I don't know which moment was sweeter: when Yuffie beat Mara or when she punched Cloud. I guess he's punished enough what with losing the baby and probably Tifa, too (not that I mind - I've never been much of a Tifa fan, and rather her than Vincent). If you ever feel like coming back, know that you have avid readers waiting for ya :) |
PenAndPoint chapter 28 . 5/16/2014 AAAAAAHHHHHH! NUUUUUUUUUU! How could you end it THERE!? I hate freaking cliffies! *pouts* Aw man, no I HAVE to know what happens or I'll go crazy! Please update again soon because I'm not going to be able to sleep well with THIS hanging over my head. Good job on the chapter by the way. It definitely was filled to the brim with emotion. :) |
Mely-Val chapter 28 . 2/20/2013 :O! I CANT STAND IT! WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT? |
CupofTeaforAliceandHatter chapter 28 . 9/5/2012 Will you ever take this beyond chapter 28? It's a great story and I'd hate for this to end on such a sad note. *wipes tear* They deserve to be happy. |
IchikoKitsuneKoumori chapter 15 . 8/16/2012 hopefully problems don't arise |
IchikoKitsuneKoumori chapter 14 . 8/16/2012 That doesn't make sense. He's so against feeling that way |
IchikoKitsuneKoumori chapter 13 . 8/16/2012 getting detracted aren't they |
IchikoKitsuneKoumori chapter 12 . 8/16/2012 OH THAT SHITHEAD DEMON! |
IchikoKitsuneKoumori chapter 11 . 8/16/2012 so cruel Cloud |