I'm sorry, this is a great story and I've always loved it. But these are the worst children in the history of literature. Somehow they have been both raised by wolves and spoiled rotten to the core. They express nothing but disinterest and contempt if not outright hatred of everyone and everything that isn't part of thier small insular world. Plain old contempt for the peons would be an improvement!

Maybe Ron's are ok, and Todd gets a pass, but how Kim could have raised such a spoiled brat is just unfathomable. And if you ever ran into any of them, your only thought would be how terrible thier parents must be.

Nothing is ever thier fault, there's never a need to compromise. Everything that opposes us will be destroyed. NO PRISONERS!

I know it's a story, but I can't see how these brats don't become supervillains. Or at best, social media posers.

Oh, and we're retroactively awarding Todd's biological mom & dad Parent of the decade, for somehow influencing him enough to NOT become a completely rotten brat, as opposed to the rest, despite the corrupting influence of the cult of false pride he fell into.

You have no idea how many times I have wanted to slap Shego over the head and scream "SAY YOU'RE SORRY YOU DUMB BITCH HOW COULD YOU HURT KIM LIKE THAT!"
Then they make up. That scene in a previous chapter where Shego took Kim down into the basement and threatened to beat her up and leave her in a box had me absolutely fuming; I almost stopped reading the fic right there. I mean, that would be like telling Smiley that she didnt love him anymore and was going to give him back to his birth parents forever.
Honestly though, if she had put hands on Kim that chapter I was seriously going to have to stop this ride.

You write stories.

You wrote that so well but I still couldent help but cringe cause I know just like mo and shego I would not like that either

I read the whole series and loved every second of it. Thank you

I get what you were going for here but I feel as if shego would go with dnamy before she let anyone touch what belonged to her...

Loved the story, although I would love to hear how Kim's cousin Joss fit in in this universe as she I actually my second favorite character from the show.

I enjoyed this a lot though I do wonder who Jayden and Bo ended up with, it felt like a lot of the relationships were shoehorned at the end even if they didn't last (amusingly I see Jayden getting a pet like her mother). The amusing emphasis of I'm gay only to date a guy was a nice twist from Shego being straight. And I adore she wouldn't add her genes to the child to make sure it would be safe, Shego made an amazing Mommy.

I binged this story in a few days and it's my first major dip into the KimxShego pairing and I adored it. I do find the idea amusing if throwing the normal crew tv style into this world to meet their counterparts and children tho. Thanks so much for writing this saga

-Milanda

This my dear friend was the longest story I have ever read and I loved every second of it. I laughed, cried, screamed, got frustrated and felt felt heartbroken I few times and loved it. Keep up to good work.

I've read all the stories in this series at least a dozen times each. you

Amazing series, wish I had been there to support as it came out. Cant wait to read your other works...now to go and read "Tramps like us"

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. but it was getting gooooooodddddd. the entire series was amazing, mind blowing, wonderful, and any other synonyms to those that I just said. thank you so much for writing these!

That was a long and enjoyable trip you took me on. I greatly appreciate the difficulty in making a story of this scope, so a very sincere congratulations, first of all. Loved it.

Now, a few things you may or may not have been told already. I've seen a number of grammatical/spelling errors, but most can be chalked up to typos, and I'm sure they are, from the lack of frequency and/or repetition. Except one. You repeatedly use "passed" when you mean "past". Very minor, I know, but also very fixable. Now, this next one is just my opinion, but I felt like a few phrases were overused in this series, something that I refer to as "writer's quirks". "Well, in his/her opinion, anyway" is the one that instantly comes to mind, and will be forever linked to this series in my head. The thing that I found strange was that you had, in nearly every case, already done an EXCELLENT job of subtly making the reader aware that it was just the opinion of the current pov character...and then kind of ruined it by pointing it out as well, making the reader (or at least me) feel like you think we're stupid.

Overall though, anything bad I have to say is just nitpicking. It was an excellent read, and here's some of the things I felt you did that made it so. First, expressing the emotions of your characters. This is among the best stories I've ever read as far as making the reader feel the character's feelings goes. It was very, very authentic, though I'm not experienced enough to explain how exactly in technical terms you pulled that off. Second, making the mundane interesting. Again, authenticity. Disregarding the occasional action scene, the daily life of Kim and Shego in your story felt so real, believable, and fun. I would say you pulled this off by doing maybe the best job I've ever seen of keeping the characters in what is recognizably their character from the show, but adding enough quirks and whatnot of your own invention to make them less...cartoonish.

Anyway, awesome work. You've earned a spot on my profile page with this one.

Ws

I just finished this series and I just wanted to thank you for it. It gave me a lot of happiness in a time I didn't have a lot. Thank you it was a magical story.