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This is a work of astounding art that I sincerely regret reading in the dead of night. Please tell me you are one of those authors in disguise on this website. If not, you can change the characters names in this story and publish it. Please do.

stayed up all night reading this shit. Thanks, I'm going to have nightmares.

I just...wow, this was really, really good. OK, I'm usually one of those pathetic skim readers who sits down and ends up scanning the story, but I read every word of this one. And it was creepy. I was a little bit freaked out, considering it was night and all when I read this. I really wish you still wrote House stories.

I've read some messed up stuff before; things about hospital wards; accounts from institutions disestablished before I was born. But NEVER have I read something remotely LIKE this. It took me about an hour to read and, by God, it was one of the blust, blackest, reddest times of my life. I didn't feel the shallow anger that comes from having a favourite die, or being grounded for a month even though you're fifteen and damn well think you can do whatever the Hell you want. I think this was probably on the very borderline of true anger. I knew what House was going through, but I didn't understand it. I could explain it if I wanted, but no matter what, I would fail to illustrate what I might have experienced. Even now, as it's sinking in, there's a part of me still shaking its head and waiting for the pill cup so I won't have to talk.

Look at me: getting all mushy, like this. You make me blush.

Excellent style, Hell of an experience, and Wilson, while not the sexiet Satan I've seen, makes one convincing little devil.

Hell of a read, and I hope you never stop.

Alright, first off I must say, this has been one incredible, twisty, mind bending ride through a most delectable of hells. And that little twist at the end, demon!Wilson, that's simply ingenius. Breathtaking.

But I must admit, I am morbidly fascinated and intrigued by this tenticle sex idea. I've seen pictures of it, heard referrances to it, but this is the first time I actually read anything involving it. Could you possibly explain it a bit to me? Is there really an explanation? Please, I'd welcome any insight.

Altogether excellent.

~IndigoNight~

Well you warned me but I didn't listen"/ “Wherever there is linoleum I’ll be there.” That is just so sad and funny. Ok, make some sense time. Was Wilson the Devil or right hand demon? Black and White guy God or Angel? My birthdays the day before Halloween, I hope you can do more demon Wilson for it")

Suann

Oh. My. God. That was great! It was a bit creepy though that Wilson was the "God Damn Prince of Darkness". But loved it. I think you should have put more implied tentacle sex on there. Oh. It just made me shiver. I was a bit confused about the Nazi/girl in the cupboard thing though. But well written.

BP

This left me trembling and thinking "What the hell?" at the same time.

I know that being intentionally vague in your stories is meant to scare people by showing the actual confusion the victim is feeling, but at it does for me is make me not understand an8d therefore not like the story.

It was a good story, but like the Contract I hope someone writes a spin off so I can actually understand it.

Please believe me when I say that I love your stories. It's hard to find something decent on , but you're really rather good: forget all that rot about you not writing decent horrorish stories. They're great. In fact, about three seconds into The Convict, I reached for the schnapps. If there are any typos in this review, or if runs on and on, please chalk it up to that; I have been reading your stuff for about five hours now.

One piece of concrit: you seem unsure about the placement of question marks, in parts such as this:

“Why am I being tied,” he asks the mattress?

The mark should be put thusly:

“Why am I being tied?” he asks the mattress.

It's just one of those things. Gotta love the English language. If you want a beta reader in the future, I'm offering my services. . If you want some assurance of my skills, read this review back and look for errors. None, right? And this when I'm not especially sober.

Love and cuddles,

Cy

P.S. - I'm not usually drunk. It's a special thing I save for 3 a.m.

that was wonderfully strange.

Holy holy holy shit. I am freaking out here, man. And I'm confused as fuck. So House the evil bitches from the 1950's rehab center were from hell? And Wilson is THE devil? I is confused. But it certainly had me on the edge of my seat for over an hour. DAMN DAMN AND THRICE DAMN. You told a good tale. And Black And White Man was my fave character.

Oh my GOD, I am not going to sleep for a week. Seriously. I mean, I was scared by The Contract, sure, but this... I love it! Totally awesome, and yet totally fucking terrifying. And Wilson as the satanic oncologist? So deliciously messed up!

I want you to know that you have done an excellent job, and that some of those images are probably permanently burned into my retinas.

I was feeling very depressed earlier so I decided to reread your story. It made me shake. Literally. You freakin scare the crap out of me. I don't have nightmares-(at a point like that I can't sleep) but I will definately be dreaming about that tonight/this morning. But seriously-answer this question by PM, Don't you think you have a shot at getting this published? Even as a minor story? It needs more mention of Implied Tentacle Sex, maybe even another scene just so it adds to the creepy factor! Course-may be too creepy for most people. Scare all your readers away! I had a hard time getting the whole Wilson, Leursson being afraid of him part. He's the Devil? Okay...I don't know. Maybe I'm just dumb. So do you plan all this out or write it down on draft paper? Did you spend hours agonizing over where this or this should go? OR did it just flow onto the keyboard for you? Good luck, and keep scaring the crap out of people! XD

P.S. You have the honor of recieving the longest review I've ever given-just don't tell anyone. 'Kay? Good!

Wonka Industries,

Jimmy-WonderBoyOncologist

I've read the whole fic in one sitting just to find out if House got out and recovered. I have no idea what happened in the end, and frankly I don't want to know. This fic is shit scary I have no words. Contract was angst and damn good one. This... I'm trembling like a leaf. I know I'll have nightmares.

The devil thing was a bomb but no explanation at all. Out of character and counter to the fact he rescued House. Did he? Sorted absolutely nothing. Which is probably why I'm still freaked, the unresolved-ness is the worst.

Don't know if this is praise or criticism, but it is crucial for my nerves that I never reading anything you've written. So have a nice life.