Reviews for When Pigs Fly |
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![]() ![]() i really loved the ending. nice & cute story . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww cute story |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like your story. so cute and funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha i like the ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? |
![]() ![]() ![]() sweet- loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute. i love the "when pigs fly" part. lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute story i like it hopw to see others from you |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it. |
![]() ![]() cute! update soon:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was interesting but i like it heheheh love ur sotries |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it. nice job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! That was such a cute one-shot! I love, it and I like that the same phrase 'when pigs fly' came up again and again in the story. I thought it was a little bit rushed at some points, but besides that I LOVED IT! I can't wait to see how your other one-shots turn out. I'm so happy to read your stoires again, and I'm going to read your profile right now to see your note on Deal With the Devil (one of my favorite fanfictions!), are you going to pick it up and finish it? I can't wait to see! Emi |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute idea but you could have added a bit more to it. perhaps go into more detail about their relationship in the past or add something about him confronting her about why she had lied to him about being able to swim. Even though the story was short it was still really enjoyable so please don’t be too upset with my criticism; honesty it was very good… so good I wished there was more to read. keep up the good work. |