"I guess that is acceptable." Great idea but the dialog makes Ranma sound more like Mr. Spock than Ranma.

Well that was dark.

The flow of the story is very disjointed. It makes it hard to do more, than just read in a mechanical fashion.

I hope you continue this

You do realize that this chapter is double-posted, right? Also, when Ranma returns home, you're probably going to have to have the portal open directly over the Nyaniichuan and drop him in. As for Ranma's were form, I would suggest that you just use a generic house cat template and make him a partial were, something like a male version of Ichigo from Tokyo Mew Mew (or a feline version of Inuyasha, depending on how you want to look at it...). I would also suggest that you not spend too much time focusing on events in the new world, don't be afraid to time lapse forward ten years to Ranma leaving to return to his world. Also be prepared for backlash if Akane isn't Ranma's partner.

just thought i'd let you know that this chapter and the last one are the same...but other than that not too shappy...

i love how this is flowing, it has me jumping from one page to another.

Wondeful

that was one of the best stories i have ever read keep up the good work and continue.

it's not bad, but you have to reread it to make sure it make sense and maybe redo a the chapters and later try posting it again

It sucked then, it sucks now.

okay,... I can't stress this enough,... SPEND MORE TIME WORKING ON YOUR STORIES. This was rushed, weird, and made little to no sense at all. I was thoroughly confused by a lot of this text,... and GOD OF CATS? where did you find this load of BS? If your talking about Bast then she's the deity of the sun (originally), the moon (after the Greeks), cats, women, and secrets. There was more behind what you explained,.. oh yes, and Bast is female,... or rather likes to take the form of a female. Look it up before write please.

To the point however, I must say that this has left me confused, and wanting my time back, and I didn't even read past chapter 2.

There is no "god of cats", cats are ALWAYS represented by a female diety, go ahead and check, prove me wrong.