I forgot how much i loved this story! Rereading it and it lives up to my memory!

Kudos to you for this amazing amazing fic! Ugh, I loved everything about it. The second to last chapter where Sorano dealt with the clan members was immaculate and really set the stage for the end of the story.

Seriously, bravo!

I change my mind— I’m glad that Sasuke is not a love interest, given how similar they actually are. Often times I’ll find fanfics where the OC is also an avenger and is paired with our favorite broody shinobi. It’s very refreshing to see that Sorano has a friendship and deep understanding of him, which is more realistic

I was not expecting that tender moment between Sorano and Sasuke. I know this story has been completed for years but it would have been interesting to see a love triangle perhaps..

Can I say I’m obsessed with your fic?! I really like how the flow of the story is similar to the anime. By this, I mean you capture the seriousness of the mission and transition to a more laid back and comical Konoha, very similar to the anime itself.

Excited to see how Sorano’s training goes!

Hi there! I’ve been reviewing without signing in because frankly I’ve been too lazy.. but this story is so good that I HAVE to log in and save to my favorites.

Your characterization of the canon characters is spot on for the most part. I love how you wrote their concern for Sorano in this chapter, which really shows how much they’ve grown to care for her!

The only critique I have is with how rough Neji seems. Like grabbing her chin, etc. I always imagined him to be too gentlemanly to do that. Otherwise great job!

You’re such a talented writer! I love that you’re purposely leaving things out about Sorano. Can’t wait to find out more!

Hi there! I’m really enjoying the dynamic between all the characters. I think you’ve captured their personalities very well in the conversations! Can’t wait to see where this story leads.

AWWWWW MY HEART
Thank you for this story!

Awww

Sorano is painfully pathetic in this chapter.

Idk why but toward the end of this chapter, I imagined her vision link with Huntress to be similar to wearing a VR headset. Then I was reminded of those videos of people trying VR for the first time while standing and falling over as the image shifted (like a roller coaster on the screen) and the thought of her immediately face planting as Huntress takes a dive is hilarious to me lol.

I was a little disappointed that there wasnt more of kakashi but I loved the story! You dont see many NejiXOC fanfiction.

This was my first Neji story I have read and it was amazing. Very beautifully written and the plot was captivating!

Aahhhh! What a lovely ending! Thank you for giving us this! I absolutely loved it-I couldn't put out down!