This was great!

This was good. I think you really improved as a writer from the first chapter to the last. I hope you decide to continue this story; but if you don't, I guess this was a good point to end it.

LOVE! 3

Wow
love it
SxJ

This story was really beautiful! I love how Kaiba is so in character and the flow of the story really got hooked up! Even more, I'm glad there was no bashing against anyone here! You made a great story! I look forward to the continuation~

it's stopped here sadly... but it was good!

the clear thing and kiss again! :D

please continue... if possible.

This story is so awesome! I really liked it how they kissed! Also liked the part where jou was in the maid costume and how seto said he looked nice. That made me cracked up, its just a awesome story I don't know what else to say other then your brilliant and to keep up the great work. Looking forward for the next update! Hopefully you'll get over your writers block.
Your a legend mate!

Placing his hand in front of his mouth because he's smiling! awe! This has been a well writen and very in character fic so far, and this part is so cute! good job

Please hurry with the next chapter!

I really love this fanfic and cannot wait for the next chapter . I give all my support to you! Xx

This is definitely one of the best Seto/Jou fics I've read. The way you went about the plot, the supporting characters (I adore Maya), not to mention keeping them in character...fantastic work! And don't beat yourself up for working on this for so long. I can be the same way with my writing. Anyway...take as long as you need...I'm just looking forward to more chapters.

I really love this fanfic! I think you've captured both their characters perfectly!
Just one thing though...
Where are the Yami's? I noticed they haven't been really mentioned at all...
Just curious!
Keep up the good work!

Finally! After 17 chapters the lovey-dovey thing has finally started! :'D!

I will be waiting for the next chapter of this sugary thing of yours so pweeeeease don't keep me waiting too much?

Pwweeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssseeeeeeeee? ;w;

Hey, just wanted to say it's nice to see you started writing again. It's been a few years since I read anything of yours (first couple chapters of this story, and a few other things), and I remember thinking you had a lot of potential. If I get around to it, I may read some of your newer stuff and leave a comment.

Anyway, better get back to my own writing, while there's still a little time left today. :P

What? What happened in Kaiba's head to have this sudden change? well it isn't sudden by any means, it's 17 chapters of building, but it seems like he would be more resistant. Though Jou is a charm-boat. haha. I'll be waiting to read more. I'm so sad for Maya! Review you later_