I'm sad. ;-;

A very sad fic. It would have been nice if it were a bit longer. Urahara does seem a bit OOC, but it doesn't matter. It was nice all the same.

I'm currently working on a fic with this pairing. It will be sad as well, but for different reasons.

Wonderful little story, although it is very sad.

I've always just thought he suffered from a quite normal consumption - or tubercolosis. I had never thought that a failed experiment could have caused his condition...

Very, very, very sad. I cried all the time now when I read it. But it's nevertheless a very good story, too.

It's Seireitei, by the way. At least that's how they say it. it means the Court of Pure Souls.

Poor Ukitake...!

We Who Shall Die, Salute You, from Andramir Armenienton, a.k.a. Ida Helene Aspenes Eitrheim.

lol love what you put at the top.

great story but I didn't finish it my attention span is off a little but waht I did read was really good! keep writing as good as you are now!

This is pretty good but Urahara is a bit OOC. I don't think he'll cry if he was in a situation like this one. He'll be really upset though.

Anyways, good job!

oh.. this is good.. but i doubt Urahara would cry.. hehez.. he doesnt seen like those sort of people. thanks for sharing!

Pretty good story. You've seem to have a large vocabulary, which is good when you're writing a fanfic. Over all, it's a pretty cool story.

BANKAI!