i know this was a one shot but you shoould really continue and oh yeah check out my story it is called affair of the heart

I really love this! You incorporated the song lyrics so well and did such a great portrayal of their relationship with the short length! I also loved that it is all from Briar's thoughts and the lack of dialog. It was just so sweet!

Awwwwww!

I didn't actually see how the song was appropriate but you really made it fit. I loved it :)

Amazing! I love the way that you weave the song and the story together without them saying the same thing.

Awwwhh! This is sooo sweet! :D I love it!

Wow, that is really beautiful!

A gorgeous song, and I love how you've applied it to this pairing. I will admit, it's not normally a pairing I would read, but with how well-written this is, it's impossible not to like!

Indie xo

awww soo cute i loved it awsome job

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THATS SO PERFECT ITS BEAUTIFUL!

Its amazing and everything i wanted the story to have. The song works in so well with the rest of the fic its amazing!

Okay, now that was just awesome!

Wow. Sounds a lot like my current relationship, so it was very touching. Thank you for a wonderful reminder of why reaching for something thought to be forbidden can be so fulfilling. Also, that song is one that's very special to me. You couldn't have chosen a better one. Thank you so much.

aw, fluff!

BANZAI!

~hollybridgetpeppermint

i LOVE LOVE LOVE the way you wrote this! nicely done! but i wish it wasn't a oneshot! yay for the s/b!

O...M...G! that is just too sweet! i can totally relate to wut the guy is feeling (only i feel it for another guy, im a girl, FYI) lol! but seriously, that has to be one of my favorites! and the song was PERFECT! i ADORE snow patrol and chasing cars is a song TO DIE FOR! as i was reading it, the song was playing thru my head and i was like, HOLY SNAP THIS IS AWESOME! im gonna share this with all my friends!

*100 thumbs up*

Really cute.