aww cute

Great story! I was surprised at how well it turned out from beginning to end. Thank you very much!

i like the idea, thanks for sharing!

! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the -government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a monday night at 12:00a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other people on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't.

This isn't fake. apparently, if u copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes u will have the best day of ur life tomorrow. u will either get kissed or asked out, if u break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room tonight. in 53 mins someone will say i love you or I'm sorry
Example 1: Jenny didn’t believe this and deleted it without even reading. the whole thing! A few days. later on the monday night, she was woken up by loud footsteps. and heavy breathing, there was. Clarissa standing there with a huge knife
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When you said Slytherin... I was wearing my Slytherin socks from Harry Potter.

I enjoyed this very much darling
This is the best ending I could think of, but I won't lie. I would definitely like a sequel, but I know how these things are. Anyway just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed it!

This is only a one-shot? Drat! By the time I got to the end of the page I had forgotten that. I would so read more if there was more. Well, now I'm off to try and find more of this pairing...but since this is the first one I came across I think I'll have a hard and hard road ahead of me.

good story

Kagome's so sweet and innocent, it's no surpise Light fell for her. I coulda sworn she was gonna kill him but to my surprise, she didn't.
I liked the story, it was very good. Nothing was rushed at all. You're a very talented writer! :D
And Kagome seemed so weary of life and I felt sad when she left him, Light vowing to create the perfect world just for her. Amazing. But he was too far gone. Tragic.

So beautiful and sad. Awesome work :)

Umm...could I perhaps bother you for a sequel...one that maybe involves Light Kagome and L

Don't be sorry,I really think that one-shot was really was great,and the darkness in this One Shot made it even better,becuase everyone needs a good sad story once in a 't worry,it was a beautiful oneshot.
Sincerely,KyoTakiKikoHyo

It's really nice. Are you gonna make a sequel?

this is a really good one shot, I love the line "Utopia does not exist. There will always be good and evil, remember that. Both have a reason for being." so cool :D thanks for writing the one shot, hopefully you can write more death note/inuyasha crossovers!

I liked this story, it was good!