I like how the narnians danced in the snow, and the holiday atmosphere it gave.

This is a wonderful story, I wish I could spend Christmas like that, too.

-Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom.

Sanaryelle,

Ah! Perhaps in Aslan's country we'll dance the great snow dance.

Wonderful story.

By the Mane!,

Agena

Awww! Cute!

That was very adorable. Very sweet and simplistic, I love it!

i really liked it

Dancing at midnight in the first snow...nice image.

It is far far Christmas time, but I think it had that feeling of winter. Great job.

What a sweet, delightful little story! You've got Tumnus and Lucy perfectly. Thank you!

What an awesome story. I've been a fan of the Great Snow Dance for...forever, I guess - it's just such a shock in the Silver Chair, and one can clearly see the eerie moonlight sparkling on the snow. And all the dancers throwing snowballs at one another is just too, too funny.

I'm not a Tumnus/Lucy shipper, either, so I'll be happy seeing it as a dear friendship. The details were perfectly painted and correct (oh, the beautiful description of the falling snow! "fat, soft flakes" - love it!), and I loved how embarrassed the dwarf was at hitting Lucy with a snowball! *laughing* And m, the yummy sounding food afterwards!

"“You must come next year, your majesty.”" Yes, in Susan's gift of new boots! *grin*

You've done a fantastic job with this - I salute you! And though it's late, a Merry Christmas to you, as well!

That was sweet and fun!

Merry Christmas to you too

well we are having some weird weather currently it is cold!

anyway really good story

That was such a cute story, and perfect for Christmas Eve! To think, [technically], that would be happening right now [as it is Christmas Eve.]

Again, did you make up that festival? 'Twas very well though out. :)

Merry Christmas, my dear!

LoveLadyx