Reviews for Becoming Human
hzlanderson chapter 3 . 4/11/2019
This book, even though it has been years since you last put a chapter up, is, thus far, captivating. I do so wish you had decided to keep going with this.
Mr.Me123 chapter 3 . 7/20/2017
I realize that it has been over five years since this note was put up, and it probably means nothing to you, but I greatly enjoyed your stories and wish you the beat in your career as a writer. You will have at least one reader if you do decide to continue. I loved the stories and the depth of the plot.
Wishing you the best of luck
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ijskonijntje chapter 3 . 4/10/2016
Still hoping this story will get updated one horrible that the actions of flamers can put people off of writing :(
himalay1729 chapter 3 . 1/10/2016
Hopefully you might want to write another fanfic. I enjoyed your stories. What are the books you have authored recently?
Jolene chapter 2 . 5/9/2015
NOOOOO. You can't stop. Please. I just stumbled upon your stories so and I can't tell you how much I love them. I can't believe you aren't finishing them.

You are one of the best fanficion writers ever. You are awesome.

If you ever continue writing these stories anywhere or if you start writing anything else, please tell us.

I love you

: )
guest chapter 3 . 2/17/2014
its like mid-Feb of 2014 and i just read a shattered prophecy yesterday
read ur chapters of becoming human today
amazing stories and great plots
i like the way u rite and im sad that u wont continue these stories
i guess i respect ur decision though,
if u ever continue becoming human anywhere else, please just let us all know.

thanks
Annon chapter 3 . 10/15/2013
I enjoyed this work to the last word. I deeply regret that I will not be able to read the rest of it. However, I hope that you are not distressed over the comments any longer.
Hoatay chapter 2 . 3/11/2013
Hello. I rarely comment in , cause of my bad English. But i have read your story and enjoy it so much. A Shattered Prophecy take my tears as well as your decision about stopping writing. It is not true if i said i love your story enough to die for, but it's true it very interesting. There maybe somethings i feel not right, not perfect, but i know i can write anything difference. You are one of the few author in fanfiction give your heart to your story. I'm not flatter you, believe me. I'm writing fanfic and fiction in my mother language, i know how it hard to keep the effort to continue until the end.

I don't know what to say to encourage you. You totally have your right to stop writing. I just want to let you know that your trying is touch somebody.

Please don't keep those bad comment in mind. You have ability, you know?
huggable-kenpachi chapter 3 . 2/18/2013
I do not see anything wrong with your style of writing. Everyone just so happens to have different styles. I quite enjoyed your stories and they left me wanting more each and every time. Being a fellow writer myself, I have learned to ignore the comments of those who don't understand how I write and focus on those of the few who actually like my works. As long as their is one fan, then that's all the inspiration you should need.
mharawolenczak chapter 3 . 12/2/2012
Severely disappointing that you left my dear. Just discovered your fics. Also, whoever wrote that crap review needs a swift kick in the head. And a few grammar lessons. (Maybe it would make more sense if it was read in context.)
Analyn 100 chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
Love it, I hope we get to see Harry get revenge on Lucius. That would be worth waiting for.
Nata Ressler chapter 3 . 8/26/2012
You really are a good writer, you know. And if you don't believe it, I guess I can't do much about it. It would be a shame to loose such lovely fanfiction. And I really think you should keep writing.

One more thing, are you really going to give the flamers the satisfaction of knowing they got to you? That they made you stop writing? I was once told that no matter where you go in the world, no matter what you do, there will always be people who don't like you, and the things you do.

It just so happened to be that those people got together and decided to pick on you.

I know you probably made up your mind, but please don't stop writing.
mjkcsk chapter 3 . 8/14/2012
aww just leave them up there! it's not so bad. The rest of us love your fics,. dont let one person spoil your work! I think you are AMAZING!
Caaro chapter 3 . 6/16/2012
Oh no! Is there any way that I can make you reconsider? I love all of your stories even though Becoming Human isn't going to be finished, could you publish the stories somewhere else? I love coming back to read good stories again and I really wish I coul keep doing that! If not though, is there any way you would allow me to copy the story over on my computer, solely so that I could reread it for myself even if it's not online?

I don't understand why people flame this story, I think it's amazing and very creative. Please consider leaving the story somewhere online so that other people can enjoy this story as much as I have.

Thank you so much for writing this story in the first place, as I've mentioned, I really enjoyed it..
Phoenixx Rising chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
You shouldn't let others stop your creativity. I did that once, and didn't write for years. Now I regret it.

Your writing style is good. I really love it. If you are dead set on deleting your fictions (which I am highly against) please allow me a little time to copy them on my computer so that I can have them to read.) I have been swamped at work and havent had time. Please give me a few more days.

I'm sorry for the rude comments of others. There is a fine line between constructive critism and just plain mean.
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