I laughed out loud several times. Good stuff!

This is saga of fetishsization of homosexuality. But its funny so :p

This is...chokes...amazing...how fun! I was referred to this wonderful story someone who'd read my "Indecency in Ankh-Morpork," about V/V discovering slash fanart about themselves. The horror, the horror! And I let it sort of dwindle down slowly instead of climaxing...errr. It's fun to play with them, isn't it? (Asks innocently) so, do you have any more of this INDECENT and SCANDALOUS type of writing one wouldn't want to fall into innocent hands?

you are evil, but in a very amusing way :-) I really enjoyed this one is so wonderfully crazy.

I love the Watch in the Discworld and you kind of made the characters be on character in a very non-canon story. On the other hand, this is Ahnk Morpork so who knows? ;-)

This was hilarious. My sister actually shot me a confused look, because I was laughing so loud.

I like your sense of humour.

I've sepent a wonderful time reading this so I was in a great mood but then I saw the date of your last update and I went all crazy.

Why, say, why would you leave all the F.A.N.G.I.R.L.S. like that!

Just two words:

Please, update.

I've been giggling all the way through reading your story. It's probably the funniest slash without the slash I've ever read (and most definitely in my top 5 favourite stories from now on)

I think I like Sybil's attitude to the who thing best, but that's only because the Vimes/Vetinari/Carrot scene get a whole category to itself.

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I'm squirming with embarassed laughter... more! XD

I would have to say that that is the best acronim for fangirls I have ever seen in my h istory of fangirling. I live in a place where homosexuality, (except lezbians, because guys dont have a problem with lezbians the bastards) is totally forwned on. I think it so fricken lol. F-ing hell, lol. Please update this. I actually laughed. Which is a huge deal since I have to try and read slash in a room with my family without getting looks. I have a will you can uaually bend horse shoes around, but that was just to...fricken-piushing-the-levels-of-gaydum-into-new-areas-of-prieviously-unkown-awesomeness. I know that doesn't count as a word, but if it did, I would say it.

LOvely! Good...midgetbee. Sorry. I'm to lazy to go on your profile to see if your a boy or a girl or not. Anyway. I'm going to keep reading. I just wanted to say how fricken awesome that was. lol

This is the funniest story I've read since an actually discworld novel! I really wish it would continue - but I'm not sure it could get any better. Thanks for sharing!

I don't think I can breathe anymore...

And I'm only halfway through...

XD oh GOD

That's evil...but hilarious

Much better than the usual gamut of V/V.