I... I YOU MADE ME FREAKING CRY! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME?! WHY?! You made me feel so sad and miserable! Just when I thought that everything would go well, and that my fantasizing that I can actually end up with Chichiri if ever I got sent into the book world... YOU JUST CRUSHED IT! CRUSHED IT ALL! HOW DARE YOU!

Damn it... DAMN IT ALL! Chichiri deserved a happy ending after all he went through! He finally got over Kouran and loved another again, and THIS is what they give him?! Those fricking gods! Dammit!

Ally's a very good OC, she certainly exceeded my expectations. She's absolutely PERFECT for Chichiri! I finally found a girl who deserved Chichiri's love! And she's not an annoying, helpless, damsel in distress who's also an irritating Mary Sue! For me that deserves full marks! XD

Thanks for the wonderful story! You really made me worry and laugh and cry and... just about everything! Only complaint was Chichiri and Tasuki seemed helpless. I mean, I know they're both more powerful than that! But I guess it's necessary for the story so... yep.

And the Kaika thing is a pretty good touch. You should've let Chichiri feel more jealous! :(

This about the...third story that I have read completely about Fushigi Yuugi and such, and, I just have to say, your story... It made me laugh, sniffle (I couldn't cry ;n;), blush, grin, etcetera etcetera. (Maybe the sniffling was just my cold, hmm...) Any who, it made my heartstrings ring joyously, and, if you want an example of how much that is, just look at all the babbling I'm doing.

I wish that I could write like this, admittedly. I envy how you can make your paragraphs so...immense...yet keep on the subject. I would be afraid I'd bore the reader to death... As for you, you make the reader anticipate the next paragraph, and hate the end. Bleh. I could learn a lot by reading your works/talking to you. I've already read two of them. I'm actually going to be reading the sequel to this in a second, after I'm done blabbing how much I love this piece.

The fact that this HAS a sequel... I mean, I believe that the immense number of reviews may have swayed the decision, and I'm happy for that. I wonder how many people were on their knees and begging for you to continue; I would be one of them. Although I do not prefer sad endings, they are realistic, and not everyone can "Ride into the sunset upon a noble steed". I'm happy you made this story this way, and that you made a sequel, though I looked at it and only saw five chapters[...] Imagine how my happiness swooped, then suddenly declined XD

Any who, I'm going to stop babbling and leave you to go on with your life, and, hopefully, this making your day, possibly. Thank you for writing this, the sequel, and the fluffy story that made my insides tingle with butterflies. I hope you write more [in the future]!

-Kait

P.S: When I saw Ally's friend's name was "Kate", I let out a quiet chuckle/gasp. I don't often find stories where some form of my name is present. Not to mention the form that everyone in school, shops, etcetera, mistakenly think my name is spelled...

Oh, and I saw one mistake that I saw a few times... I believe the correct past tense of "Smell" is "Smelled", not "Smelt". 1) Smelt is a bony, not-very-tasty fish, 2) It is a way to melt or fuse metal[s]. I actually had to look up the term to be sure... I'm not putting that there to be mean, but to let you know, such as, I see a lot of people on Teen Ink get "Spelled" and "Spelt" mixed up, and it's become a pet-peeve of mine... Any who, sorry if that sounded mean or anything [I am, sadly, a grammar Nazi...; I am trying, and failing, to help]. Thank you, again, for writing this.

That's SO SAD! Stupid GODS, you made me cry when you didn't grant her wish (no ffense intended)! But all-in-all, that was a really great story!

great job! ur fight scenes are incredible! this story is AWESOME! u're a great writer.

/ / / / / / awwwww i luv this chapter! it's so great! chichiri's becoming jealous anyway, great job!

*squeal* this is just TOO CUTE! i luv it! chichiri's definitely in luv he can't stay away, no matter how hard he tries! anyways, great chapter. i really luv this story!

that was amazing! great job! i luved the details and the adrenaline rush - i could see everything (in my mind, that is. i'm obviously not actually doing what u're writing...). anyways, great job! i luved it 0

*squeals*

AWWWWWW this is adorable! i was blushing the whole time, it was so cute / / / anyways, i really like this story. great job!

this story is REALLY interesting! u did a great job with the details and descriptions. i luv the part where hotohori and chichiri looked at ally like she just "swallowed a cactus". ha. very creative. great job!

I loved this fanfic of yours :D. I seriously tried to stop reading it at 12 a.m. only to come back 5 minutes later to finish reading it cause i couldn't stop XD.

WOW. i'm still breathing because i can't seem to do that while reading this last chapter. i'm a total fan of chichiri. kyaaah! very sad, truly beautiful. splendid job. :)

Your imagery for your first chapter was great. I really love how you could feel the emotion of their inevitable parting and understand how these books could make such a difference. I often talk with my bud Emily about the times when we were obsessed with Yugioh and Teen Titans to the point of claiming characters and such. Thank you for making me remember

WOW. I mean, seriously, WOW. Congratulations on a well-written story. It started out okay...and then I thought Ally was getting a bit Sue-ish, but you know what? She wasn't annoying AT ALL! In fact, she's quickly becoming one of my favourite characters! :) I was going to ask that you write a sequel, but I just found it and I can't wait to read it! lol.

There were a few technical errors here, but nothing too major. It's still a great story, and Ally still has that big heart I totally love! Hats off!

i've just finished chapter 5 and i love it! my sister told me about it and thought i should read it cuz my name is ally too, isn't that great? i'll let you know what i think when i finish the whole thing. thanks!

WA! ... snif ... snif ...

That is the most funny, heart warming, romantic and saddest story I have ever red on fanfiction. You have serious talent!

I know that you already made a sequal to this story but mabe you should make a nother story this time with Taka and Miaki in it. You can do a story with Ally in the OVA series of Fushigi Yuugi.

KEEP ON WRITING!