Plz make more

I love your story please write more

Please write more stories! THIS ONE IS A-W-E-S-O-M-E-!

awesome! oh my god i love it!

Everything seems to be coming togather nicely, good job. Hope that you plan to update. :3

Really intresting start to the story and I really like the summery.

This is really good! :D

this whole 2 chapters r already freakin me out. and i dought youll even see this since you havent updated in 2 whole review or else thing seriouly pisses me off but its well played.

I love My Journey Trough Hoenn!

So please update as soon as you can!

Ja'ne!

i know this is a good stoy but i think the may brenden thing went to fast...other than that good story!

plz finish this is really good!

hi again. i really like this story. happy birthday. i didnt get ur emai, i dont think, but 4 some odd reason it doesnt let us send them through fanfictions, but i think i know how 2. also i dont think i can send through MSN unless i go somewhere else. i'll be 17 on Aug. 19th. i'll try 2 send u this on ur email, but i'll send u mine as well. w . ryanericmarie yahoo . com. or u could use w . nattoby yahoo . com. i finally got my stories up, but they're no longer under Sar T. they r now under Sar T. Loves Ryou Shirogane. i have ideas 4 Zoey's Journey: The Legend of Hoenn, but i dont have much. u could have elliot & zoey tell each other they love each other and they could traval with Aden, & then they could also find another friend. then 4 enemies u could put the name Nate Nolden in it, just because he's made my & my family missrable. he's my mom's ex & he would beat her & still does, he also beats me, which by the way if u remember i told u i was hit by a car w/ a drunk driver in it, well that was him. we're trying 2 put him in jail, but the stupid cops around here anyways r taking his side & hes just sliding though it. he claimed that my mother keyed his car and used the bathroon on his porch, 'cause she was "drunk" yeah right! my mom doesnt get drunk, unless she's w/ her friend, who cant drink 'casue she's pregnant. & my mom's not 5, she didnt key his car. he said he watched her do it from his kitcen window, but if u think about that, its kinda impossossibal from where his window is in the kitchen, he'd have 2 get over the sink in front of the window and concidering his driveway is around a corner, i dont think he could watch anything from there. we're taking him 2 court & i get 2 talk, but he'll b in handcuffs, 'cause the last time we went 2 court, he was lying, i got 2 talk & told the truth, nothing but the truth, so help me god, (i'm not relgious) after that nate got pi**ed & started chasing me around the court until he grabed me by my wrist & pinned me 2 a wall by my upper arms. that was in Barraboo WI, then we took it 2 Madison WI, where he got put on house arrest. he should've gone 2 jail. anywho, i'm doing fine from the car accident, me & Chirstina arent friends anymore. she still craves 4 attention. she got mad me 'cause i brought in oranges 4 the class 1 day & she is alergic 2 them. i warned her i was brining them, but she just thought i brought them 2 piss her off. i warned he 'cause i knew she was allergic 2 them, but i didnt know she was deathly allergic 2 them, she never told me. i guess my frined brenda, (not my ex-sister-in-law) isnt talking 2 her 'casue Christina dissopered & they had 2 break up in2 groups 2 find her. brenda lives in an appartment & chritna went in2 the laundry room. alls she wants is attention. but anyways u could use nate & chirtina as evil people in Zoey's Journey: The Legend of Hoenn. macy is my best friend right now, u could if u want use her name in it. u could have zoey find new cute poke'mon. or if u dont wanna use macy, u could use corina, bridget, kiki, renee, wesley, dren, sardon or tarb as new friends.

well i have 2 go.

my kitten Stormy says hi & wants 2 help type.

ttyl

Write Soon, Sar T. Loves Ryou Shirogane

i really like it it's cute and seems fun

I think you should continue this story...sure the beginning is a little stilted and yes you did get a fair share of negative reviews, but I'm sure it will get better as it progresses and I really do have no objection against StevenxOC fics unless the characters are out of character of course. Good luck. Hopefully you'll update.

Cool! i like this story so far! I can't wait to see what Pokemon Heidi catches! I hope that you hve enough reveiws to post chap. 3 now! I can't wait for heidi to meet Steven either! keepup the good work! :)