| Reviews for Fatherly Love? |
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   won't be the Victim chapter 5 . 6/13/2008 She better stay with Dallas! |
| My-Arabian-Knight chapter 5 . 10/11/2007 I LIKE THIS STORY I REALLY HOPE YOU CONTINUE IT :) |
| edwards other bella chapter 5 . 5/3/2007 please update... |
| caitly chapter 5 . 4/20/2007 Oh no! Don't let her leave Dally! |
| dreamer 3097 chapter 5 . 4/8/2007 this is good |
| Confuzzled2011 chapter 5 . 4/8/2007 good chappy! i really like this story |
| axellover8 chapter 4 . 2/27/2007 keep up the good work, i lover ur story. i feel really bad for dally though. he really cares about his sister |
| RoAr.LiKe.A.lIoN chapter 1 . 2/8/2007 Im gonna tell you something and I hope you dont get offended ezaly but at first the only reason I read this was because you asked me to, but in the end i ended up really liking this I hope you continue with it and I cant wait for your next story:) one question: Do you rele have 9 brothers and sisters? |
| xocrazililkelox chapter 4 . 2/1/2007 aww great update.I hope Dallas puts his damn male pride aside and saves his sister from making a big mistake. But drama is probally right around the update please. PS:can't wait to read this new story. |
| TheGirlWithKaleidoscopeEyes chapter 4 . 2/1/2007 Dallas stop being such an ignorant asshole! lol update soon! :)(: |
| dreamer 3097 chapter 4 . 2/1/2007 this is good please let her stay with dally |
| Soda rox my sox off chapter 1 . 1/19/2007 No, the reason why Dally is his charector in the book is because his dad deserted him, and that makes him they way he is. Your totally flipping around Dally's charector, it's an okay story, but it's OCC in my opinion. |
| TheGirlWithKaleidoscopeEyes chapter 3 . 1/16/2007 no! i don't want her to live with her father! he's an ass! update soon! :)(: |
| xocrazililkelox chapter 3 . 1/15/2007 great update , i dont see anything wrong with Dallas charchter he is acting like himself. Please update soon. |
| dreamer 3097 chapter 3 . 1/14/2007 this is good don't let her leave. |
