Reviews for A Mermaid's Tears |
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MargaritaSal97 chapter 13 . 2/4/2017 Thank you for writing this, it made my day! |
0 Green-Eyed Goon 0 chapter 1 . 5/4/2015 Huh, I like the details you made through the ending about the both of them. I've got to admit, you totally nailed Neji I think, and made him way more... I think the right word is "abusive" and "conflicted " toward Hinata. I can take a pretty good guess about who this HE was. Naruto, of course. All over all, I like your first chapter so far, well done with the Hyuuga cousin's personalities. I can tell the rest of these chapters are going to be pretty interesting too. :) |
sundes2013 chapter 9 . 9/25/2014 Hahaha aww this is cute! |
themirrorminder.372259 chapter 6 . 10/29/2013 This one shots are so tear-jerking and so powerful, I love them! I especially liked this one and the one where Sasuke likes Hinata :) You should write more SasukexHinata fics if you have time! You writing is amazing and I know you'd write the couple beautifully :) |
aurora0914 chapter 13 . 7/5/2013 out of curiosity, how is this sasuhina? it's nice and all, though |
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 13 . 2/12/2012 Psycho is back! Too short for me. I need the other shot. Question is: Are we getting another shot? You've been gone too long already. Just so you know, I'll be on the waiting line :) |
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 12 . 2/12/2012 Oh, no! Sasuke, that's worth seven years of bad luck. LOL xD What was Hinata asking for? Come on Hinata, surprise the world! It's not like she's weak, a life like the one she had cannot be lived by someone weak :/ Hit. Punch. Scratch. Slap. Whatever. Just do something, you can cry a river after that or before or in the middle. Just accomplish it. Hinata can be her own hero . |
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 11 . 2/12/2012 I like it. Short but accurate. They never understand what it takes to endure something until they're in that place. It is never as easy as it seems. It is always a different point of view and stance. |
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 10 . 2/11/2012 God, poor boy... I love NaruHina, but KakaHina has something that thrills me more. And that's an answer to my previous review as well :) By the way, that last sentence of the story made me shiver. Such a sadness and resignation gets me :0 But I'm happy Hinata and Kakashi had a good ending! haha :D |
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 9 . 2/11/2012 I love this! It's so nicely written :D KakaHina is my favorite pairing after all. And there's not much fandom about them out there u.u So far, this chapter's been my favorite. And I liked the smile play :) What's the reason of Naruto's disappointment? Don't tell me he wanted a confession? xD Thanks a lot for writing this delightful story |
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 8 . 2/11/2012 Nice plot :) Haku and Hinata... that's an unusual pairing, but not complains here ;) |
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 7 . 2/10/2012 This one was really enjoyable! A chakra cake! That's brilliant :O Really cute story :) |
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 6 . 2/10/2012 I don't find it depressing at all. I don't even feel pity for Hiashi. I think, this is just as life is: bittersweet. |
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 5 . 2/10/2012 Hahaha, this is indeed light! It's easy to enjoy :) It's really troublesome if the girl is allergic to dogs, poor thing. The fact that she kept quiet makes it cute |
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 4 . 2/10/2012 Is it just me or this chapter gives off a more mature feeling? I think it does. Well, nicely done :) |