Hey, the ending was clever. I liked it. Good job. That was really good.

That was a really good fic. Brilliantly written.

Aw. This is a cute little story.

I absolutely LOVE EdxWin fics and this one was very well written! I kind of felt bad when Winry said he was just like his father and when Winry made him cry ( Poor Ed, however it's true in some aspects I suppose. Anyway, great work! D

hi... i'm berry pissed off at you... why you ask?... well... because, EDWARD ELRIC the Fullmetal Alchemist is mine! not yours, not winry's not anybody elses but mine!

(i have to kill winry!)

EDWARD ELRIC the Fullmetal Alchemist is mine!

i love EDWARD ELRIC the Fullmetal Alchemist

miss EDWARD ELRIC

I like that it uses mostly pronouns. It puts it back on the basic level and makes the story applicable to all people. A fill in the blank sort of thing, you know? Anyways, great job. I really liked this, because it gives me warm fuzzy feelings, especially at the end. You could have made it really sad and depressing, but you didn't, and I thank you for that. Keep it up!

short but sweet :)

Great! I really liked this one! I have just recently gotten back into EdWin fics...I've been on a serious Royai kick lately - the former is probably because I just got the FMA:COS movie on Sunday and I've already watched it about three times... Anyway, really great story!

aw thats sweet

Love it, love it. I liked the part when Winry told Ed that he is exactly like Hoheinheim. Kawai, love your effect, you don't need to be bothered.

Oh My GOD! THIS WAS AWSOME! The plot was great! And how history repeates itself ah! I rlly loved this stpry! please write more EdxWinry's!

Hey, I think I'm the first to review.

That was sweet ! I love EdxWinry stories, these two are just meant to be together. I think you pictured them both very well. Congratulations !