cool

This was nice, I like how you wrote the characters, their conversation was interesting and with a very good point. Good work!

i loved it. if only you could add another chapter, please!

nice. Yay, other people reason this wa, too!

Definitely intriguing. It's a shame you don't have any more Slayers fanfiction.

I like how you characterize Xellos and Zelgadis here.

Aww, cute :D Xellos (er... you...) make a lot of good points that a lot of people don't usually think about too - Zelgadis just wouldn't be Zelgadis if he really changed back D

Great story!You have captured the characters very well and the plot is interesting and inocent,even if the end is so touching!I liked your fiction very much!

o: It's sad this doesn't have any reviews~. While it's really short and could still be continued in many ways, it's written well. Plenty enough for a cute one-shot.